Dumb Harry Potter Fanfic Moments

Part 1

- The main character is in first year, meaning she (it's always a she) is 11 years old and yet she looks like she is 17 

- The main character is dating guys in their 4th and 5th years of Hogwarts. In real life do you usually see a 11 year old dating 16 year olds?

- Draco is this hot bad boy who gets all the girls. He didn't seem that way when Hermione punched him in third year

- The riddikulus (get it... it's a spell) grammar. Like mate you sound like a baby. Perhaps read what you write next time?

i puled out my wAndd and cassed teh speel sayong avadra kadabra. the persen screamed soooo loud adn than died on the ground. den i did it again aND kileled voldemottt and i caaal him voelemdort ebcause im lke so brave and then he dIed efh. 

- The students wear whatever they want to class and just put on their robes over it. I know for a fact that that is not allowed. Hogwarts has an actual uniform, this isn't America you know

- Everyone falls in love with her within the first chapter and she has boys running after her, wooing her. 

- Fred is always a love interest. Why not George?????????

- Harry has a twin sister that nobody knew about. Like, c'mon. Voldy isn't going to realise that there is another freaking baby sitting right next to Harry. And how do other people not know about this baby? Did Lily and James never tell anyone about this baby?