Book Review

Yeh Hai Aashiqui

Review by CriticG

A decent story with a lovable cast is not presented in the best possible way.

To start with, the story talks about two breakups, and we expect a happy ending in here. With that little piece of summary, I was excited to read the story because it is a challenge to write about breakups and here we had two of them. So, I'd love to appreciate the author for her imagination.

However, this story is more like a dadima story where the author is telling us the story. We have limited dialogues, and the story moves quickly. So, the first thing is that we do not have emotions. Love without emotions is awful.

Another important point is the abuse of 'then'. Almost every other statement starts with 'then'. It is annoying, at least for me.

I'd suggest the author to read well-written stories on Wattpad. If you want, I can help you with some suggestions.

Rating: 4/10