Aries: "You should make it more visually appealing."
Taurus: "I don't think you're getting enough out of it tbh."
Gemini: "Try to look at it from another perspective."
Cancer: "It doesn't convey how you're feeling "you don't know how I'm feeling" it doesn't convey how your feeling right now "I wrote this when I was 10" then why did you show me??"
Leo: "omg!! that's great let me show you what I did "that's not really-" ... maybe you can learn from what I did!!"
Virgo: [tells you where you went wrong and what words you should change it to (in the event of speaking/writing)]
Libra: "Add depth, you're showing it from a face value! Development!!"
Scorpio: "here [draws something] this is how I should see the character. It looks great, but, this would make it better."
Sagittarius: "where's the adventure at tho?"
Capricorn: "[roasts it] "that doesn't help me-" [calls you a little bitch]"
Aquarius: "[tells you 100% everything you did wrong]... but idk cause it's not my work."
Pisces: "[points out a few things]... but I'm sorry it's really good and I like the plot I just fucking bashed and all of the characters who, if I knew them, I'd fucking hate them, but, besides that, it's great."
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Zodiac Signs
RandomJust another book of the Zodiac Signs. All from Tumblr. (Completed)