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We walked through the doors and as soon as the Elite spotted Nicole, they ran up to her, screaming and laughing. Istood by awkwardly as they gave their stupid air-kisses. i mean, whats up wth that? It's like saying I love you but I don't want any of your potential disease so i'm gonna keep my distance. Love you though!
Ugh, I hate fake people.It appeared as if Nicole was going to be there for a while so i started to leave. Before I could make my exit, though, Tina, the Elite's Queen, asked me, "So, Brooklyn, you're coming to the party, right? I'm sure Nicole told you about it?"
"Yeah, I'll be there" I gave her a tight smile which she gladly returned
"We'd be SOO lucky to have you" as the girls around her giggled. Even Nicole didn't say anything. whatever. I turned around and made my way, being pushed and shoved here and there by the careless new freshmen as I tried to make it to my locker alive.
I walked into my first class, history, a few seconds before the bell rang. I spotted Mary Ann, and sat on one side of her
"How was youre summer?"
"eh...okay"
That's weird, she's never been so...uninterested in talking to me
"Is everything okay?"
"Yeah, no I'm fine". She then turns to Sarah, a quiet girl, and tries to start up a conversation.
Seemed kinda weird to me, but I decided to just let it go. I tuned her out and started listening to Mr. Braxton talk about how a bill becomes a law.
ugh...real work on the first day????
Just when I started to feel as if I was going to just die of boredom... a guy walked in. No, let me rephrase that. A sexy guy walked in.
All the girls who had been nearly snoring with boredom suddenly came to life. The guy actually looked scared as even the boys checked him out. I didn't blame him. The girls were looking at him like they were hungry lionesses and he was their fresh meat.
I laughed at the expression on all of their faces, and he instantly looked at me. I felt nervous as we locked eyes. A small smile tugged at his lips, and I could feel the glares from all the thirsty girls in the room. I smiled back, and right at that moment Mr. Braxton cut in to introduce him.
"This is Adrian Baquero, a new exchange student from Puerto Rico. Please honor our new student".
A few girls were brave enough to suggest that he sit next to them. Even Mary Ann waved him over suggestively. I stared at her in shock.
Really?!?! She never used to be like that around guys...
I must have been staring daggers into the side of her head, but she paid me no mind.
Adrian already had plans as to who he was going to sit next to, ignoring the girls. Keeping his eyes on me, he headed straight in my direction. As he gt closer, I could see the piercings in his face, and the tattoos on his arms, even on his neck. And his shirt was open just enough for me to glimpse the tattoos on his ch-
Wait, was I just fantasizing about this guy! I just met him. And then, not even formally. But he's so beautiful...
No! I will have self control! I will have self control! Self control! Self cont-
"Hello". I realized that he was sitting right next to me.
"uhh...hi. are you knew here?". God! what an idiot! of course he's new here the teacher just said he's an exchange student from Puerto Rico. " oh uhhh.. sorry about that". He chuckled. He has a nice laugh....
"Its okay. It's nice to meet you..."
"Brooklyn".
" Well then its great to meet you Brooklyn". He smiled at me.
I just love the way he says my name...
Focus Brook! He's talking to you!
" I'm sorry, what?"
" I was just asking you if you had a pen I could borrow.. if not I could just ask someone else..."
"No!". Okay, maybe i said that a little too forcefully. He looked amused
"Hmm.. a bit possessive aren't you? We aren't even dating yet". He smirked.
Yet...he said YET!!
" Umm i have a pen you can borrow". I couldn't even look him in the eye i was blushing so hard.
Our fingers brushed as i gave him the pen, and i shivered involuntarily. He noticed, and stared at me with those clear blue eyes of his. "Thank you".
"No problem".
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When the bell rang, I stood up and turned towards him, about to ask for my pen back.. But Mary An got to him first, and I certainly wasn't about to compete for his attention.
"Hey umm.. there's gonna be this party next weekend, and i would tell you the address but i'd have to ask my friend for it..so how about we just exchange numbers and i'll text it to you later?"
Slick.
"Yeah, sure".
Gullible.
I walked out the door, no longer caring about my pen.
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