Author: @Longxhugs
Genre: Romance
Chapters: 11 (so far)
Status: on going
Short Desription: "about tangled forced marriage"
Rating: 6 out of 10
Fair
This book needs some editing and in certain parts the point of view changes. It is best that you stick to the same point of view when you write otherwise it may be confusing. The one thing I personally didn't like or quite understand was how and why the main character's feelings developed so quickly and were so strong. Other than that I thought the story line was interesting and with some editing and with the continuation of your book it may turn out very good.
