lemons with an Asexuell

Muzan x reader pt.1

Our first story is a ton of Demon slayer one shots character x reader, yeah and my cat just stole my seat while I got some water. I'm melting in this heat, it's inhuman. Oh and I'm not really into the whole Demon Slayer lore, I read the manga and stopped at the... 13th? Idk. What a great start.

The first is with Muzan. Muzan?? Out of all Characters you chose fucking Muzan? Who... I don't wanna know.

It was the middle of the night when I snuck out of the Butterfly mansion. I wasn't on duty tonight, which is why I had to be quiet not to wake anyone up.

Even if you were on duty, I think you would still need to be quiet. The fact that you're not on duty, just means you have to be more careful, so you won't get spotted. Btw I'll also search for rhetorical devices, for example here we have our first alliteration. Yipiiee

When i arrived at the location I saw Muzan waiting for me.

WHY is he just standing there. Aren't there many demons slayers just A FEW METERS away, sleeping. And I think my english skills are good enough to know that it's 'I' not 'i'. It doesn't cost you time to write that instead. Please, don't hurt my eyes.

He turned around and opened his arms, I ran over and hugged him as he embraced me with a gentle kiss.

Okay, we ignore this completely unrealistic thing here happening. So, you are able to write that damn 'I' big. I'm proud of you.

And, WHERE the fuck are they? Are they in the bushes? Or in the middle of the fucking street? Ik it's night, but I would not kiss the sworn enemy of someone, that I know is sleeping a few meters away and really cares for me. How stupid can someone be. And why does he have NO PROBLEM with that?

"You're just as beautiful as last time i saw you" he spoke

1. Noo the poor I
2. Deluluuuu
3. Actually, I'm pretty sure that it would be 'as the last time', Idk but it triggers the hell out of me (please tell me whats correct)

"You might be thinking, if you're in the butterfly mansion you must be in the demons slayer corps what are you doing with Muzan Kinutsuji?"

Valid question, thank you very much. Lets make a quizzz
Why do you think the reader is out here with Muzan?
A.) He's their sugar daddy
B.) He wants to reveal that he's actually Micheal Jackson 'hee hee'
C.) They fell in love
D.) They are besties and Muzan wants them to do his nails

Take a guess

Well you know the saying of the heart knows what it wants.

I'm pretty sure that you should have used a comma or quotation marks there, it sounds a bit off.
Oh no...

Thats what happened between Muzan and I.

It's C.)! Congratulations on everyone who guessed it right. Pfft, as if bro, sure he doesn't want to use you as a ... *googles* hostage, hostage is the word. Sounds like sausage.

"Ive missed you" I say

The fact that there are no I've, and no dot triggers me immense. IT'S NOT SO HARD TO DO DOTS.

"I don't have long, with it being summer dawn comes rather quickly the night are shorter" he says.

WHY ARE WE NOW SWITCHING TO PRESENT? Seriously, I'm almost raging and didn't even wrote 600 words.
And please, PLEASE use commas. I don't know a lot about the rules of comma in english, but this sentence is hella confusing, that can't be right.
Well, who am I to judge. I don't even know the rules of comma in my native language, tho I love commas.