I'm in the akatsuki! - Deidara love story

Hi minna, for all those who are reading this i hop you guys understand that prologue means before just to set the theme. In this prologue Misako is 11 while deidara is 13. "" meaans their talking and ' ' means it's in their thoughts. 2-3 comments from different people please :3

Prologue

 It was a warm sunny morning. You woke up to a beatiful day and started wondering around you're family's large mansion. You were hoping anyone would remember but to them (servants and family members) everything seemed ordinary. You were extremely sad to find that the day had passed without anyone greeting you then, suddenly you heard a loud crash from your balcony. "Hey Misako-chan! What are you doing moping inside your room un ?" Your blonde best friend suddenly said. "Deidara!" "That's my name don't wear it out heh?" "Why are you sad Ko-chan hmmm?" Deidara asked

"It's because everyone i know forgot about my birthday"  Misako said looking to the floor. "Everyone except me yeah. Happy Birthday! but I guess I should have said that when youfound me earlier" Misakko looked with a goofy smile on her face "I knew you would remember MY birthday Dei-kun " He looked up and went back to your balcony where he picked something up "What's that dei It's my gift for you it's not much but i hope you like it." I took the wrapped gift and teared the wrapper apart.

"Hey! I worked hard to wrap that" Deidara said looking hurt. "Hmmmm" She opened the gift to find a set of clay dolls. "Wow they're just right for my doll house. Thanks!'' She loooked back at Deidara to see him puff up his chest and look away from her. "you still didn't apologize for what you did." What do you mean?'' She looked at him and remebered what he said about the wrapper "Sorry about the wrapper but when i was little my butler said you would get good luck with your gifts if you tear up the wrapper.Sorry Dei can ya forgive me?''

"Sure I can. Bye I have to get back to training tomorrow it's gonna be very early. Bye." Misako looked at the gift and then to the window. 'I wish he could stay but unlike me a rich snotty brat he's training to beccome a ninja...