reviewing my own books

Hamburger goes away

This is my other successful book (obviously by my terribly low standards) so much like the glassy and shot put book, it'll be interesting going back to it

Chapter 1- 4/5

Good start imo. It does what it needs to and isn't boring

Chapter 2 - 4/5

Another pretty good 1. I wouldn't call it funny or anything but I feel like it peeks intrest in what happens next

Chapter 3 - 5/5

Still not funny however the plot starts to really pick up and megaphone truly starts her... I guess B - plot for the book

Chapter 4 - 4/5

Does a really good of  making megaphone more 3 dimensional. Also progress' her plot in a entertaining way

Chapter 5 - 5/5

We get introduced to sandwich who I love! Also this is the 1st chapter where it felt like I was trying to be funny, most the jokes worked imo.

Chapter 6 - 5/5

I always remembered this being my favorite chapter. There's a few good jokes mixed in but even though there isn't a massive amount of story progress going on I just love the character interactions.

Chapter 7 - 4/5

Pointless, yes. Funny, also yes. I do sadly think that this is around the time I was running out of ideas so don't expect the final 3 chapters to be great.

Chapter 8 - 3/5

This is sadly, the 1st chapter I wouldn't call good. I liked the ending but everything feels so rushed and unnatural sadly not a hit

Chapter 9 - 3/5

Even more rushed and there's no good ending to save it. Was really close to giving it a 2.

Chapter 10 - 4/5

So I liked this chapter. Megaphones interactions with Sandwich and especially Hamburger were great. Hamburger himself was also great. So the reason I'm giving this a 4 is the fact that it feels like a weak ending. While really good on its own as an ending it feels kinda unsatisfying and leaves you wanting more. So not the best ending

Ratings:
5/5: 3
4/5: 5
3/5: 2
2 - 1/5: 0

Overall this book was good. I have really complex thoughts on it if I'm being real, the story was mostly good, but there aren't as many good jokes in here as I would've liked. Also by chapter 7 or 8 it starts getting more dull. I do enjoy overall but it got some flaws holding it back.