reviewing my own books

Glassy and shot put

My most famous story. Let's see if it holds up

Chapter 1 - 4/5

Already better than anything my last book had. While still simple I find glassy really cute here and there's a few solid jokes in here as well

Chapter 2 - 5/5

Cute and hilarious at the same time. I was really starting to get my comedic footing here.

Chapter 3 - 5/5

This might be my favorite chapter I've ever wrote. It's brilliant in both character and humor, easy 5

Chapter 4 - 5/5

Not as amazing as the previous chapter but still a banger.

Chapter 5 - 4/5

It's not that funny and Glassy's arc felt a bit rushed but I still enjoyed reading it

Chapter 6 - 4/5

Another pretty good 1. Shot put thinking about how he loves walking is still 1 of the funniest bits of the whole book. Also coconuts POV was scary but really cool at the same time

Chapter 7 - 5/5

Another chapter that succeeds in balancing plot and humor. The only terrible part was glassy saying she would kys herself if she didn't satisfy shot put like the hell was I on when I wrote that. Also why'd I make this and the next chapter a 2 partner this ain't a 1 shot book.

Chapter 8 - 4/5

Pretty good. That's all.

Chapter 9 - 5/5

Weird. Bizarre. Hilarious. That's why this a 5

Chapter 10 - 4/5

Probably the worst chapter. There's barely a plot, however the jokes made this 1 good

Chapter 11 - 5/5

Funny, heart warming, and very entertaining. Everything I wanted to do with this book :)

Ratings:

5/5: 6
4/5: 5
3 - 1/5: 0

What a glow up compared to my previous book. This was an amazing book still. Even if you don't ship glassy and shot put, there's enough great jokes to keep you engaged. Plz let me know your thoughts on this book in the comments and until next time. Thx for reading