Deep Sixed: Extended Edition

Enraging Mr. Dolfa

This part, is where he show his wrath, after seeing one of my classmates not following instructions.

Mr. Dolfa: Hey Fritz, that's not what you draw.

Fritz: Uhh, that's what I draw?

Mr. Dolfa: Let me see... *Founds his older version of the sketch, and it's different from what he is doing* Listen here, you're mother would be proud if you show it to her... WHAT A DOWNGRADE!

Dorian: Here it is again...

Mr. Dolfa, is on the rage again, and this would go on for a while, until when there are only half of what it remains, which just to show how scary he is. For now, we were automatically proceeded to the remaining six out of 24 students, and then Mr. Dolfa told us to proceed to make an abstract art.

Mr. Dolfa: Alright, NOW ALL SIX OF YOU MUST DO THEIR BEST TO MAKE AN ABSTRACT ART. LETS SEE OF WHAT YOU CAN DO!

And then everyone starts to do their abstract art. I decided to call my piece "Past" where it shows the chaotic left side, which is the short, calm part with a chaotic side on rest, and then it transitions on the middle, to another chaotic side to how my present self on the right half. This shows how I currently see my life.

And then others, doesn't know how abstract works, which lead to another classic Mr. Dolfa rage moment.

Mr. Dolfa: Hey, I'm surprised of what you draw.

Ben: Oh thank you I'll give you a 120% next time.

Mr. Dolfa: I'm surprised on how shit you are.

Ben: Oh thank you.... Sorry.

Mr. Dolfa: Hey, why don't you start drawing from the basics again.

Dorian: Oh damn...

And then, after this, only three of us remained, and it's up to us to show what we can doz and there is no turning back.

Mr. Dolfa: Congratulations, you three are one of the best of the class. Sure there are other two that are good, but you all three are in another league. So why don't you get a break for now and continue it tomorrow. You have all the time you can come up on what you draw for tomorrow, and be sure you're ready, because there could only be one....

Jonathan: Thanks professor.

And then this is where it sinks in, because Charlemagne is now against me for this competition. To avoid problems, Dorian talk to Mr. Dolfa just to know what could possibly go wrong.

Dorian: Mr. Dolfa, we need to talk about something.

Mr. Dolfa: What is it?

Dorian: You see, I always talk about your daughter, but now let's talk about Jonathan and Charlemagne, because you need to know this.

Mr. Dolfa: Did they cheat?

Dorian: No, it's about then fighting recently. They tend to fight because of competition, and since they are evenly matched, they would do whatever it takes to get on top, and because of that, she got in to trouble after burning his notebook, which almost killed her from his retaliation.

Mr. Dolfa: My gosh.... Look, this is just a game.

Dorian: I know, but it felt like a competition for them. What do we do about itm

Mr. Dolfa: If they're evenly matched, it could be a reason that I would do a joint winners, if they both performed well. But she herself also needs to control her issues losing to something.

Dorian: I see, I have to try harder...

So later that night, I planned on what to draw, and think deep... I chose the topic, which is on what I am. I decided to chat to Charlemagne about what she wants to make.

In her response, it was the same thing, and then we agreed to come up on what we are. Since we are polar opposites, which I am an introvert while she is an extrovert, we decided to choose that. Dorian meanwhile decided to draw himself as a buff dude riding with the sharks, because he's from Florida.

The next day, we came in prepared, and then we started to draw. We do our own thing, creating strokes that symbolizes on who we are. Mr. Dolfa watches us intently, and he was surprised on what Dorian was doing.

Mr. Dolfa: Dorian, what are you drawing?

Dorian: Me as a Floridian.

Mr. Dolfa: You with a great abs, riding with sharks and going around with the blazing guns... Is this a publicity stunt for Rosemary?

Dorian: No I'm just doing what I wanted to.

Mr. Dolfa: Oh, it's just your self-expression. Thats nice.

Dorian: Thank you sir. By the way, how are these two doing?

Mr. Dolfa: Oh right, Jonathan and Charlemagne. Ok I'll check on them. *proceeds to look on our drawing* Are you two drawing the self-expression thing?

Jonathan: Yes it's just on what we both gathered on who we are, personally.

Charlemagne: We talked about it, and we decided to do the opposites.

Mr. Dolfa: So you mean, same topic, opposite category?

Jonathan: Yeah, and it's easier when we are both opposites.

Mr. Dolfa: What makes you both opposites?

Charlemagne: He's an introvert, and I'm an extrovert.

Mr. Dolfa: I see. I don't interact with you for the first two years, but I see the way you act.

And then after an hour and a half, were all done, and it's time for him to judge our drawings. It's a tough decision, because all of our arts are good, and he only comes up with few words.

Mr. Dolfa: Alright, the three of you, comehere.

Charlemagne, Jonathan, and Dorian: *Goes in front of Mr. Dolfa*

Mr. Dolfa: So we come to a decision, and it was a very, very tough one. Basically, you three are good, and I don't know what to pick, is just two of you are better. So I pick Dorian to be the third place. Dorian I know you made a good art, its just someone does it better and you can see it.

Dorian: I know they're better than me, thank you.

Mr. Dolfa: Ok, the two of you... I don't know how to compare it. Your idea is the same, and yet you express yourself and it's different from both of you. You know what... I think I can have two winners, because both of you did very well.

Charlemagne: Oh, thank you Mr. Dolfa.

Mr. Dolfa: And by the way, you two should work as a team, because if you work together, you two are going to be unstoppable in the class.

Jonathan: I know, were doing whatever we could just to have the unison.

After this, all three of us got the highest grade because we did so well. And then Mr. Dolfa, finally became chill, and everything was toned down.