hi hiii! these are the collection of poems I wrote and abandoned when I was 13. six years after, I'm revisiting it and I'm still clueless on how to improve. I'm not an English speaker and I would really appreciate criticism on how to better my poems...
I love you so much- So much so that you appear in my dreams. Constantly running in my mind; Tenaciously in my heart.
But those are futile because I'm unable to hold your hand, Unable to kiss your lips, Tell me, when I think of you this way- how should I assuage my desires?
If I could but beg the wind to blow away my longing for you- If I could but plead the lake to wash away my yearning for you-
I long to see you- The one I love so deeply, The soul to my body, And the coral to my sea. The core to my heart, And the dawn to my dusk.
I want you. I want you. I want you. I crave you.
So please. Please, Please! Come back to me.
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