🌹 R2 - Romance/ChickLit 🌹

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Your entries were just as great but this is a contest after all!

Please don't feel discouraged for having not placed this round. It just means your story may need a little more editing but each individual plot was still wonderful.

There is always next year! We encourage you guys to return!


There is always next year! We encourage you guys to return!

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🌹 His Devilish Queen by Romantasy_love (Mature)

Book Title: 10/10
Book Cover: 10/10
Story Blurb: 10/10
Story Plot: 7/10
Story Description: 7/10
Character Development: 4/10
Originality/Creativity: 6/10
Reader Engagement: 9/10
Setting: 5/10
Writing Style: 2/5
Grammar/Punctuation: 1/5
Total: 68/100

Review by _Baby_A_A_ :

The story itself is progressing well, but it needs a huge ton of editing. A lot of punctuation marks missing, grammatical errors, wrong prepositions, and the descriptions need some work as well. The plot is nice and I really love the cover, it's so beautiful. I am sure the book will shine more once it has been edited since it has a lot of potential.

🌹  His Mishti by  Itshikha (Mature)

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🌹 His Mishti by Itshikha (Mature)

Book Title: 7/10
Book Cover: 7/10
Story Blurb: 9/10
Story Plot: 7/10
Story Description: 8/10
Character Development: 7/10
Originality/Creativity: 6/10
Reader Engagement: 8/10
Setting: 9/10
Writing Style: 3/5
Grammar/Punctuation: 3/5
Total: 74/100

Review by _Baby_A_A_ :

So far, the story is progressing well. I like how it's fast paced and the little quotes throughout. The story line does feel a bit similar to typical enemy to lovers. I admire the use of range of vocabularies to describe certain settings, but I think there are some words that are repetitive in the same paragraphs.

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