❝ there's nothing i
can see; darkness
becomes me... ❞
（ story by tommysmiller )
（ until dawn; female oc ）
（ cover by elenafishers_ ）
（ original version ）
i'm going to keep this version of the story up & as it is, and post the rewrite as a completely new book. if you're a new reader, i encourage you to read the rewritten version instead of this, as it's a much better display of my writing skills 4-5 years after the original was first posted. the rewrite will give ellie's story the justice it deserves at last. but, for nostalgia's sake, this version will remain up for anyone wanting to read-read.
below is the cover of the new version.
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i've decided to recast ellie. i still LOVE alycia, the original face claim, but i feel ruby cruz just fits the idea i have of ellie in my mind when planning out the rewrite.
other than face claim & writing changes, the major difference in this story will be choices & ending. as this is a CHOICE-BASED game, i've decided i'm going to explore some other routes Ellie could have gone done throughout the length of the game. while the beginning will still be very similar, just more fleshed out, the choices / decisions made by characters throughout will differ, and thus, different outcomes
BOOM, BUTTERFLY EFFECT.
anyway, that's enough of me yapping <3
at the time of posting this, the re-write will be posted on my account! thank you to those of you who supported this story, and those who will support the rewrite 🫶
