Are you looking for a place where somebody will review your story honestly? Where they talk and let you know how well your story will do when it comes to reads? Then, welcome to my blunt reviews. This is where I will take your story and break it dow...
At the end of the day, I will never say that a story is a bad story, because there is no such thing as a bad story. There is a story that needs touch ups. There is a story that needs rebuilt. There's a story that needs better structure. These are these. are things that I will say and these things are not to be mean or malice. These are things that I see as a reader and a. reviewer. Mind you once again, I am not a professional. I read as a reader and these are the things that I see. Just like my rules say, just like how I have shown how I break things down. Now that being said, do I think this author has potential? This author has tons of potential Do I think that the story needs a little bit of TLC, a little bit of love, a little bit of cleaning up to make it a fantastic story? I do feel. I feel that if the story was edited and the sentence structure. was a little better and the sentences flowed amazingly that this story would be out of the box. Amazing Do I say go back and do it now? No. Go back and do it when the story is finished. Because when the story is finished, then you can Polish it up and it'll be the best story you can possibly think of. Get a cover and the story will be a bestseller is how I feel personally. Right now it is in the baby stage and it does need a lot of TLC and it does need a lot of love. But that being said, it is still remarkable story and it is a story that I enjoyed once. again my opinions and my thoughts are not to be mean. They are not to be malicious. They are not to be hurtful. These are just my brutally honest opinions and that is why my book is called. blunt reviews. because I will not sugarcoat anything and I will not say things that you want to hear. I will say things that you need to hear because at the end of the day, if I cannot help you be a better author or a better writer from my reviews than I am not doing my job So that being said, I think this author has a lot of potential and I can't wait to see the work that they have in the future.
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Summary of the book:
Story about a girl who has a lot of conditions for accepting love and thats why she has been single .And a boy who became ready to accept all the conditions to love her, bit the more he knows her he understands the conditions she have represents scars of battles she has fought all her life. It doesn't matter whether scars are small or big what matters is the pain .Even if she doesn't have a sword wound she has numerous thorn wounds.Could he understand her and most importantly will she ever love him without conditions .Stay updated to know more🙂🙂
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Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they cannot be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.
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