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It was definitely creative, but it was very interesting to read. To me, I did feel like it was more. leaning towards a younger group than what I'm used to, but at the end of the day, it was still a unique and very creative style of writing.
Originality: 15/15
This was definitely a different type of story. I'm not sure if it was technically considered fan fiction or what, but it was definitely different than I've ever read, and it was definitely considered original. It was unique, and it was something that I could appreciate as a reader.
Storytelling: 15/15
The Storytelling was definitely different. It felt like I was more in like the Pokemon world, watching everything unravel and listening to it from the point of view of a new Pokemon trainer-type thing, but it was still interesting to read.
Character: 15/15
The characters I felt were very fun and very childlike. This wasn't a book for like maturity level. This was like what felt like to me a child book, and the characters were just fun and relaxed, but they still had their own personalities, which I loved.
Story Flows: 15/15
Did not see anything wrong with the story. I did not see any grammar errors or Sentence structure. errors. everything ran. nicely and very smoothly. The sentence structure was great.
Cover Design:15 /15
I do feel like to cover and the story went well together. I felt like they complement each other very nicely.
Final Thoughts:10 /10
At the end of the day, I found the story very interesting to read, but it was more like a child's story than a very serious one. So, for me, it is not something I would continue to read just because it got boring after a while. I'm not saying that you should stop writing anything like that. I do not mean to say these to be mean. These are just my opinions. After a while, I became very bored with it, and I no longer wanted to continue reading. But all in all, the story was very good and followed a very cute storyline. It made me feel like I was back in Pokemon World.
Chapters I read:3
Total points: 100
Summary of the book:
Wilfride Beth Carter, a being known as a Keeper is lost in an alternate world, where she encounters these bizarre and yet endearing creatures and has to learn her purpose there before she can return home. Even it means following they're customs and traditions by becoming a Pokemon Trainer.
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