Blunt Reviews

❄️In The Night Sky❄️

Creativity: 15/15

 This is very interesting, and I'm kind of confused about it. Not in a bad way, but I am confused because I'm wondering if this is be fan fiction. Regardless, the creativity of the story is unique and very interesting, something I can appreciate.

Originality: 15/15

Originality in the story is definitely there, like with the story is written, and I love the way that the author does it. I've  not read a story like this, so it definitely is original. It's very unique and interesting to read.

Storytelling:10 /15

 I feel like it's not really storytelling more than conversation, if I'm being honest. I feel like there's too much conversation in the story, and it really doesn't unfold as a story, so when reading it, I feel like I'm reading more of a conversation than a story. It's time for the author to pause and go over the story, or something happens, but there's just a lot of conversation at the end of the day.

Character: 15/15

The characters are definitely different, and I can't say that's a bad thing it's interesting thing like the main character is very kind of confusing to me because like he seems like he's amazing and he's like the normal character, but then there are times where he faints and after he faints it's like you go back to like the beginning I feel. Why did you faint what happened things like that. Keeps you wondering why he keeps fainting. But at the end of the day it's still an interesting character

Story Flows: 10/15

i couldn't really take pictures to show anything because my Internet's acting funny, but there are some things that dish need to be edited I think once the author's done with the story just going back and rereading and editing will work because there were some sentences and some of the chapters that just didn't flow right are sound right and it made the sentence structure very off and didn't run smoothly

Cover Design:15 /15

the cover was really lovely and it really did complement the story

Final Thoughts:10 /10

I do feel like the story was a very unique story and I really enjoyed it I do feel like it does need a little bit of editing a little bit of TLC once that happens I think the story will be phenomenal

Chapters I read:3

Total points: 90

Summary of the book: 

A novel inspired by TomorrowXTogether 'Nap Of A Star (별의 낮잠)'"Hyunie ah, what should I do if we were distant from each other? How can I know that you're still there?" "The stars." "Ah...?" "If we were truly be apart one day, you can always look at the stars to know that I, too, was staying under the same stars as you." "Will you also be looking at the stars then?" "Yes, I will also be looking at the stars. Just like you." "Pinky promise?" "Pinky promise." And yet, one forgets the promise they made.While one is staying true to it.Cover: Credited to the rightfully owner because I only found it on Pinterest and added some editing to it. If you happens to know the owner, feel free to inform me so I can officially ask for their permission. Will change if they didn't allow it.

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