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Creativity:15 /15 I honestly do not know where the author gets their creativity spark from. They came up with this story, but let me tell you, the story is gold.
Originality:15 /15 I feel that the originality and story are on point; the author's writing is so original. It starts off very slow-paced, but I'm not even mad about that because it's the beauty of how slow it is and how detailed it is that makes me excited about reading a book like this.
Storytelling:15 /15 To me, this is definitely more of a Storyteller-type book. While reading it, I felt like I was inside a book, watching it unfold with a little girl and the dog. And I loved that I love being inside of a book where I can visually see what's going on and all the emotions. To me, that is a well-thought-out book.
Character:15 /15 I love the characters, but I also feel the pain and sorrow. I love the characters, but I also feel the pain and suffering that the little girl is going through. And because I can feel that I can connect with the character, which I always tell people is fundamental to the connection with the character. You want to be able to connect, and I could.
Story Flows:15/15 I feel like it flowed very well. I didn't see any grammar errors or anything that made me comment that it didn't sound right. Everything was said right, flowed well, and the story was very well written.
Cover Design: 5/15 Sorry, but I feel like it doesn't do the story justice when it comes down to the cover. The cover should be that of a little girl with a dog or even a little girl. To me, the way the author has it does not fit the story at all. It's a good story, and it needs to be represented.
Final Thoughts:10 /10 Once again, the only issue I have is YouTube videos because they do not pause when I'm trying to read, so I have to turn my volume down. This again takes away from the story and my enjoyment because if I don't turn my book down, the report will continue to play. Besides that, the story was a very well-written and well-thought-out story. The author should be proud of the story that they created because it's gorgeous.
Chapters I read:3
Total points: 95
Summary of the book:
How many lives does it take to erase a sin?Lynn goes with a stranger with the same half-moon eyes as her, to the House of Memories, the night she was killed. A Dragon instructs her to go and meet her past reincarnation, and put an end to the life and memories of her reincarnation. Unwillingly, Lynn does so after learning that she was cursed up to the seventh life, her last life on the planet Earth.Now Lynn has to team up with past friends who have the same eyes as her, to defeat Satan and remove their curse, so that all of them can start life afresh on the new planet.
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