Mass effect chapter one changes

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AN: these line were changed from the story to sound better. So I decided to post the old line on here because why not.
Since the story is not out yet on here and only patron. Which btw first chapter is free for everyone. You can read the chapter on my patreon now if you wanted to . Those line came from that chapter

Btw these are taken slightly out of order so it kinda hard tell what going on.

Lastly some stuff are censored, as to not expose the story that it from

Cut lines:

His eyes land on the nozzle of a weapon aimed at him. The person in front of him was a ??????

?????: sorry about pointing a gun at you. I'm just on edge.

She wipes herself up from dust and checks if her suit is all right

Y/n: that's alright we all have those days. You stay safe now goodbye.

Sometime later

?????: Come on, we got to meet Ambassador ????? at the ?????? Tower.

That all everyone remember first chapter is free now on patron

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