Vaada Ye Hai Ki Hum Nahin Aayenge Baar Baar

Jee Bhar Ke Dekh Lijiye,Humko Kareeb Se....🌼

Abhi muhurat mein 5 mins (minutes)bache hain, main 5 mins aur Priya ka wait karungi...

There was a sign of firm belief that Maa had on Priya. Something that even Priya told me before leaving for her clinic,"Main time per pahunch jaaungi ,maine vaada kiya hai aapki Maa se,a promise is a promise Mr. Kapoor ''.What went wrong then,why isn't she here till now?And moreover,the thing that I came to know that Priya never reached her clinic,still she didn't return.Where is She?

And I couldn't help stopping my legs from moving towards the outer space of our mansion and there She was,Mrs.Priya Ram Kapoor, panting hard and rushing towards the house, sensing her delay to reach here.But wait, there's still 5 minutes left,so she better answer my questions before heading towards the gate.

Priya (startled to see Ram)- Mr. Kapoor,aap bahar kya kar rahe hain?Chaliye ,Pooja ka time ho raha hai,aaiye...

Ram (catching her by her wrist)- Ek second Priya...tum mujhe bta rahi ho ki pooja ka time ho raha hai...toh kahan thin tum itni der se,jabki tum acche se jaanti thi aaj ke din ki importance,right?Kahan thi tum,jabki tum apne clinic bhi nahin pahunchi...tell me..

Priya (gasped at his tone ,for the first time She witnessed his wrath,and more importantly his disappointment)- Main....sab batati hoon,phale ander...

Ram (looking intensely into her eyes)- Nahin... pahle ye baat poori karenge hum,phir ander chalenge...(and he let out the true sentiments) Really Priya..? Matlab out of all,tumne aisa kiya,tumne..?Tum toh mujhe smjhati ho,ki hume apno ki ,unki feelings ki kadr karni chahiye ,toh kya hai ye sab...? Maine kaha tha ki agar kaam mein busy ho toh call karna ,bta dena mujhe..main bta deta Maa ko,aur tumhe kya lagta ki woh naraz hoti...tum jaanti ho ki woh tumhe kitna pyaar karti hain,unhone shaadi per bhi tumhe apna kaam khtm karke aane ko kaha tha ,main khud tumhare saath gaya tha,toh phir kya baat hui aaj...kya hua ki tum apni Maa ko,apne pati ko inform nahin kar paayi....jab main tumhare parents ki kadr karta hoon,toh tum kyun nahin...pata hai ander sab tumhare baare mein ulta seedha bol rahen the,aur Maa unse tumhare liye lad rahi thin...kya hai ye sab Priya..?

Priya (trembling)- Aap pahle hi mujhe doshi maan chuke hain toh...main kuch bhi kahoon kya farq padega....hamesha ki tarah,main hi galat hoon toh inn sawalon ka kya hi matlab hai aapke liye...

Ram (tightening his grip)- What did you say?Maine kab dosh diya tumhe,main bas disappointed hoon...hum dono ke beech Jo bhi hai,agar abhi bhi meri Maa ye dekhengi ki main tumpe gussa kar raha hoon,wo bina soche samjhe,aake mujhe jhadengi,mujhe daantegi....unke liye tum unka wo baccha ho Jo ab jaake unhe mila hai....aur tum ye jaanti ho Priya...

Priya (firmly)- Kya hua...ruke kyun?Boliye,sab sunn rahin hoon main..?

Ram(lowering his voice)- Priya,dekho I know... I know kabhi hume family aur kaam ke beech chunna hota hai,aur kabhi kaam ko chuna bhi jaata hai but ..Aaj tum apne kaam per bhi nahin thin,phir kyun der ho gayi...aur main koi ilzaam nahin laga raha ,jisse ummeed hoti hai,usi se uske tootne ka dukh bhi hota hai...

Priya (let out a mocking laugh)- Sach...kuch jyada hi ummed nahin laga rakhi aapne ek 'contract wife' se...ye ummeed khud se lagayi hai kabhi?Kya hoga uss din jab aapki Maa ko pata chalega ki jis Bahu ko Laxmi smjh kar wo apne ghar laayi hain,use toh unke bete ne 'contract ke saath ' yahan aane ko convince kiya hai..main toh kuch waqt ke liye yahan hoon,phir..?Aur jis tareeke se aap mujhe puch rahen hain,aapne kabhi Kriti se toh nahin pucha ki kyun wo baar baar aapki maa ke saamne humare rishte ko awkward position mein daalti hai,jabki use pta hai ki ye rishta aapki Maa ke liya kya hai...baar baar tokne per bhi wo aapke paas jaati hai,jabki mere gharwale aur aapki Maa ye baat notice karte hain...kya lagta hai aapko,aapki Maa ko pta nahin chal raha ki Kriti kya kar rahi hai?Ek baar bhi socha aapne ki kyun hume Goa bulaya gaya,jabki unke according toh ye ek love marriage hai,toh hum kyun time spend nahin karna chahenge..phir kyun jabardasti jhooth bolkar,hume Goa bulaya gaya..(seeing Ram confused)...Main batati hoon,ye ek motherly instinct hai Mr Kapoor,aapki Maa ko kahin na kahin ye lagta hai ki hum dono ke rishte mein kuch toh unreal hai,kuch dooriyan hai...baar baar , matlab shaadi se pahle bhi,humari sagai ke din Kriti aapko kamre se bulane Jaa rahi thi,tab toh Shardul se relationship ka koi scene nahin tha,phir bhi aapki Maa ne use rok kar kaha ''Ye ab sirf Priya ka right hai'', because aapka bedroom ek personal space hai...mujhe pata hai aapki Maa,Aleka ko nahin rokti per Kriti ko roka unhone....aur aisi bahut si baatein hain per....(wiping her tears) and kya kaha aapne ki mujhe unke emotions ki kadr nahin..?Mr Kapoor,main jaanti hoon ki main aapke liye kuch nahin hoon,per main ek insaan hoon aur main jaanti hoon ki zinda logo ko humare pyaar ki zarurat hoti hai,uske baad kon kaha hoga kise pata.....aur kya kaha aapne ki aap mujhse disappointed hai... seriously?Toh kya aapko dikhai nahin deta ,jab Kriti baar baat mujhe aakar ye kahti hai ki main kuch nahin hoon,aap uske,ye ghar uska ..toh phir mujhe btaiye main yahan kar kya rahi hoon,agar meri zarurat hi nahin hai?Maine kabhi nahin kaha ki aap mere gharwalon se kyun baat kar rahen hain,kyun meri Maa ne aapse wo sab kuch kaha jo main sunne ko tarsati thi..nahin na?Kabhi meri self-respect ka socha hai aapne,jab mujhe do minute mein aakar meri jagah dikhayi jaati hai,Jo ki ek garbage bin se jyada nahin hai(Ram tried to deny it)..nahin, Mr Kapoor,I know ye sab naatak hai,per yaad rakhiye ye naatak maine nahin racha,Haan main iska hissa zarur hoon aur jab natak per se parda uthega toh,toh dil Mera hi tootega....aur main aapse kahti hoon ki mere Pati,aap mujhse sawal karne ka haq rakhte hain toh meri self-respect ke liye kyun ye sawal aapne Kriti se nahin kiye?Aise toh aapko sabke man ki pta hoti hai,toh Jo aapke aankhon ke saamne ho raha hai,woh kyun nahi dikhta ya phir very conveniently,aap ye sab dekhna hi nahin chahte....main Gold -digger,main logo ka Dil dukhati hoon,main apne ex ko stalk karti hoon,main ye ,main wo...sab kuch main hi toh karti hoon,per main batau main kya kar rahi hoon..(Ram again tried to calm her down)..nahin ,suniye aaj aap..main bas aap sabke ishaaron per naach rahin hoon,kyunki kis munh se kuch bolu,mujhe toh bolne se pahle ye kahkar chup kara diya jaata hai ki..ki main bass ek chaabi wali gudiya hoon,jise aap kahenge toh Maa ke paas rahna hai aur aapki GF kahe toh uthke chale jaana hai,per in sab mein aapki Maa ki kya galti,aur meri kya galti...do pal unhone mujhse pyaar se baat kar li toh main toh wo pyar unhe nahin de sakti ,kyunki tabhi aapki GF mujhe kahti hai,ki jyada mel jol mat badhaon,teen mahine baad toh ye ghar, Maa aur aap(Ram) sab uske...toh main kya hi kah sakti hoon?... Mujhse naraz hain na aap....toh kya aapne ek baar bhi apni GF se pucha ki , clinic ke liye nikalne se pahle usne mujhe nahin kaha ki agar main nahin aaungi ,toh bhi koi baat nahin ,kyunki wo hai aapko,iss ghar ko sambhalne ke liye...nahin,aap tab kuch nahin bolenge?Aur sahi bhi hai,teen mahine ke liye ,apne 'love of life' ko kyun ' sahi baat ' ke liye bhi kyun question karna...mujhe lagta tha ki aap ek 'just ' insaan hain,per nahin aap bhi dekhkar hi vaar karte hain ,per sach kahoon ye aapko shobha nahin deta
.....mujhe pta hai yahan mera kuch nahin,per ek Maa agar mere sar per pyaar se haath rakh rahi hain toh kya main use jhatak doon...?Aapka toh kya hai,aapko mujhse koi lena dena nahin hai,main Aaj yahan hoon ,kal nahin...koi farq nahin padega aapko,per do Dil zarur tootenge'aapki Maa aur mera'...kyunki ye pyar koi plan nahin tha,kyunki pyar planning se nahin hota....mujhe laga tha kam se kam aap iss baat ki respect rakhenge ki duniya ke saamne hi sahi main aapki biwi hoon,aur aap meri izzat rakhenge...kabhi socha hai jab aap apni GF ke saath paaye jaaten hain,toh duniya mujhe kaisi nazaron se dekhti hai,ki iska pati iske alwa sab ke saath dikhta hai...aapki secretary mujhe kaise dekhti hain ,jab aapki Maa ke kahne per main aapke liye lunch laayi thi aur aapki GF ne ye jaankar ,ye kaha ki Main,Priya Ram Kapoor,apne husband ke cabin mein permission maangne ke baad bhi nahin Jaa sakti kyunki ,Kriti ye kah Rahi hai...(Seeing Ram shocked)..yeah ,please tell me ki aapko ye sab nahin pata,Kriti ne nahin btaya?..aapki Maa ki nazron mein kitni dafa maine ye sawaal dekha hai,ki aap mere saath kyun nahin hote.. bataiye kya jawab doon unhe,naatak hai na,toh dijiye script,mere dialogues...

Ram(deeply remorseful)- Pri...

Priya (coming out of his grip)- Mr Kapoor,saamne wale per keechad tab uchhalna chahiye,jab hum khud Satya ki murat ho...ek baar iss situation ko change kijiye,maine aapse shaadi ki Hui hai,contract marriage aur main Yuvraj se Jaa jaakar mil...

Ram(enraged)-Priyaaaaa...

Priya (shaking her head)- Jo baat aap sun nahin sakte,main use jeeti hoon...aapko pata hai mujhe kaise lagta hai,jab aap mujhper haq jtate hain,mujhe pyaar karne ki koshish karte hain...mujhe lagta hai ki main koi product hoon,jise use karo aur phenk do..kyunki product ki toh koi value nahi,na hi koi feelings...na aap use koi jawab dete aur na hi mujhe jaane de rahen hain..aur agar ek aurat aisa karti toh ,use characterless ka khitab de diya jaata but this is not cute ,not adorable at all mr.kapoor...kya lagta hai aapko ki maine suna nahin jab aapne kaha ki ,' aapka man mujhe me laga hua hai ya ki aapko main chahiye hoon'...maine sab suna aur aapse immediately pucha bhi ,per Kriti ko dekhkar aap chup ho gaye...aap confused nahin hain,aap bas sach dekhna nahin chahte....main aapki biwi ,jaisi bhi nakli toh nakli sahi,per shaadi asli thi,aap mere pati bnana chahte hai per mujhe patni ki izzat kyun nahin dete,ek insaan hone ka margin bhi nahin dete aap toh...Kam se kam apne naam ki laaj rakhiye,kyunki jinka naam aapko diya gaya hai unhone toh kaha tha ki ''main hazaar baar uss swarag ko thukrata hoon,Jahan meri patni mere sang nahin''....waqt mile toh sochna...aur aapke sawalon ke jawab mein mujhe koi dilchaspi nahin,kyunki aapko mere hone na hone se koi farak nahin padta...per ander do Maaein khadi hain,jinhe unki beti ,Bahu ki fiqr hai toh Jo Janna hai ander aake Jaan lijiye...kyunki jinhe meri izzat ka maan nahin,unke kisi sawaal ka jawaab mujh per laazimi nahin hai....

And Priya moved towards the mansion, leaving a dejected Ram behind,with her words ringing in his mind.." Kam se kam apne naam ki laaj rakhiye,kyunki jinka naam aapko diya gaya hai unhone toh kaha tha ki ''main hazaar baar uss swarag ko thukrata hoon,Jahan meri patni mere sang nahin''....''

Watched today's sneak peek promo,thought of writing my version before the episode aired...tell me ,how did you like it?