𝐁𝐓𝐒 𝐌𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐚𝐞 𝐋𝐢𝐧𝐞 (𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰-𝐒𝐡𝐨𝐩)

𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖#𝟕 "Past Unfold"

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REVIEWER- yojasha

AUTHOR- asbangtan

Title- I really love it. It really connects strong to
what the story is about. Great choice of
words too.
10/10

Cover- It was beautiful. The only catching part of the cover for me is Jungkook of course. The title shown in the cover is a bit small. You can try
to make the font bigger so it can be more
eye-catching because the cover is always the
first one your reader is going to judge and
look to before diving into it. So you either
make the title stand out more.
8/10

Description- The choice of words and glimpse of the story makes it more eye-catching for the reader. It makes it more mysterious that it can pull you to deep deeper into it but somehow it can also be confusing if you're bot into this kind
of stories.
8/10

First chapter- It was a usual 'start the story chapter', honestly speaking, I'm not into a 'character POV' chapter that makes me feel like I'm reading their journals. So far, the first chapter justifies what will going to happen next so l like the context. The first line qoutations are
also good, it makes the chapters more
interesting to read.
6/10

Last chapter/ epilogue/ bonus chapters etc,- I will definitely wait for the next chapter.
Since, it wasn't the last of the last the author
did finest great in suspensing the readers.
Every end of the chapter keeps you wanting
more of it.
10/10

Plot- I haven't even read the whole book so the
previous plot presented is amazing, it has the
typical queen and his warrior or prince plot
but the way the author delivers it is more
unique than others.
8/10

Dialogue Delivery- It was okay for me, the dialouges are all
delivered well.
9/10

Grammar/Vocabulary/Spelling- This part is what absolutely amaze me. The
author really did a great job with her choice
of words and sentence structures to make the
story more entertaining. If there's some little
errors, there's always a room for
improvement;>
10/10

Overall Enjoyment- The only chapter I didn't that much enjoyed is the first and the chapters where Y/n and Jk was in their school trip, I guess but the rest of the history or alternative universe chapters catches me. It was the best part. I love how the author make the princess, a warrior type,
brave and independent. I think it will be more
enjoyable if the first chapter was in third
person pov, but it will only depend on the
lovely writer. Overall, it was wonderfull.
18/20

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87/100

✵.｡.✰ 𝔻𝕠𝕟'𝕥 𝕗𝕠𝕣𝕘𝕖𝕥 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕟𝕜 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕣𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨𝕖𝕣✰.｡.✵