unbroken (unexpected series)

Chapter 57

But if not, I'm all for an unknown plot twist concerning Sarah!!! Yes... there is something wrong with Pat NOW trying to find Norine and I'll be honest, I think I've given up just about a few clues as to who Sarah really is. I get what you're saying that Phillip said about how you are who they want you to be, but Sarah really is just an insecure woman. I mean I have a friend, and his mom and dad own a bunch of apartment buildings and whatnot. Yesterday, he told me that his dad, has one of his ex girlfriends living in one of those places for free. He said his mom was acting funny and when he was like 'what's up?' She tells him that she's so embarrassed but she can't tell anyone about that, and she doesn't - she has no options. Why? Because literally everything is in his fathers name... she is financially dependent on this man - and he knows it. She's always been this stay at home mom, taking care of the kids, she didn't go to school... like she's stuck and hurting over this. This woman is Sarah... I've said it before she moved into Norines home, she didn't get a job, Pat works, she stays home. The house wasn't even in her name, they didn't get the insurance money, she's pregnant with twins... it might hurt her feelings that he's doing this but what can Sarah really say? Don't look for your ex-wife which might lead to your kids because it hurts me? Amelia is fourteen and worried that her mom and her will go back to her life when she was seven and struggling and Pat found them.

I think the maze would be great because it will be bittersweet once they are all back together again. Also Ben and Oak will know they weren't written off like Norine. I hope Pat is man enough to address Amelia. It still seem as if he is more worried about hurting them than finding his children. All will be revealed in due time so I won't rush because I don't want the book to ever end. Peace&Love Haha... won't keep the book going that long but one more is promised. Pat Lawson... he's... like I know everyone was like "write his POV! Write his POV" and it's so far from what I know. Like I'm not a parent, but I have two AWESOME parents. My mom is my best friend, and my dad is pretty cool too. So for me to write Pat, I have to go against all the things my dad were, all the things I would love to eventually find in some future guy and like write from the bottom of the bottom lol. Like each time I write from Pat's POV I cry for Oakley because I mean people aren't perfect, but I can imagine some person in real life going through this... going out of their way, doing little things for just a bit of recognition and not getting it.

I agree with the fan that said she wasn't going to read any more until you wrote a lot so she could spend a lot of time reading. I was going to wait until you finished the story and then read the whole, but I couldn't wait. I have to tell you this: You are your writting and your writting is you!!!!!!!!!!!!everything you do is so sincere and so clean. I love it. So, here I am reading one chapter at a time,. I don't like it but I'll keep on doing it as a tribute to you for yor excellent stories. Right now I'm taking a break to read Scratch. See you later on Unbroken. GBY!!!!!!!!!! I've tried doing that before... not reading something until the author wrote more but... then it was like all I could think about, did they update? Did they update? Which led to me checking twice as much as before lol. So uhm... goodluck? I'm pretty fast about updating... I mean I started writing this in January/February? It's April and I'm almost done. It's nearly five hundred pages... I update unless I have to study or do something for my parents or help somewhere, I volunteer at a children's hospital too... I basically play with kids who are getting checkups for volunteer hours. So yeah, but I set aside time to update daily. Unless I'm sick which I can't expect or avoid. Plus I have a life outside things like studying/working...

I love how you can give your characters separate personalities from yourself, and how u question their choices when u made them. It actually shows how much work you put into these characters.. This is just overall an amazing series... thank you... that's really hard to do... like I said with Pat, you know going to the bottom of the barrel to write him lol. I know better than Kieran and some of the others, I know that if someone hurts you, it's not your fault, you aren't to blame. I mean I had a friend that got roughed up at school and she was wearing sandals, tight skinny jeans and a top with a shirt unbuttoned over it, she was completely covered I mean compared to what some other people wear to school and the teacher was like, maybe you shouldn't dress so provocative. (Creep). And for a while she got really self-conscious about like everything she would wear, when it wasn't her fault. I mean I didn't know skinny jeans was like code for invade and disrespect my personal space. So yeah, even when I just want to write that Kieran gets that he wasn't at fault, that it was the others, I know that he's not in the right place yet to admit that to himself, but I get all happy when I finally have him make any sort of improvement because it's so long overdue.-I'm a geek like that.