unbroken (unexpected series)

Chapter 57

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QUESTIONS/comments FROM PREVIOUS CHAPTERS with my responses:

THEY ALL NEED TO COME ON SO CHELSEA CAN GO OFF on AMELIA AND SARAH.

Yeah... I'm not bringing them to the island, like that will never happen. The thing with Oakley, Amelia and Sarah, Pat is the one that brought all this drama in... I mean he overcompensated for one child while ignoring the other. Someone said that it's like I'm writing about two different people in one person, which is so conflicting but that's exactly who Pat is. It's not that I'm making him innocent or redeemable because honestly, he isn't... I've said it time and time again, Oakley is the one that can truly grow here, Pat is so tied up, he's so deep in his own mistakes that I'd need to write a book about him alone to get him on the right path and it's not his story. I know some people may want some happy ending where he welcomes Oakley back and picks her over Amelia but that is not going to happen. Families - even in fictional stories -can be estranged.

Well it sounds like Amelia manipulating again. Hope Pat gets to read Oakley's diary. He's such a clueless pri©k. Agreed, he won't get Oakley's undying love, but he'll get that diary. If readers think he's conflicted right now? Wait until he gets Oakley's diary.

Could it be that Sarah is one of the unseen members of the elders? NO. I'll answer it now... Sarah isn't an unseen just a really insecure woman.

I dont think its a good idea for Chelsea to put the pat and the family with them in the island (as much as I love grandpa and grandma to be reunited with the kids) because the the bad elders would know something is up since they were watching oakley and ben before and still might be watching. This might give them bigger hint that Chelsea and everyone is still alive and find them. Yup... agreed. I'm sure everyone knows who's coming to the island next... right?? Guesses?

Gabriel: Pack suspected for loss of mate...BLOW IT UP

We need a way to kidnap Oakley,Ben Grant and Julia...BLOW THA CAR UP

Information about us possibly in the house...BLOW IT UP

Oakley and Julias family investigating our whereabouts and have personal info from hospital and police station that could get us caught...BLOW-

Chelsea: Not this time.. OKAY, THIS WAS SERIOUSLY... I LAUGHED SO HARD, I CRIED! That being said... I'm really consistent with my characters... Gabriel he's intelligent but as much as Chelsea needed to grow so did he. I mean he was raised by George... another sh!tty-father.

See.. See. Something isn't right about Sarah. Even a 14 year old see's how bad this can be for their relationship. & how can she (any woman) be okay with that.

I think it's possible for her to be an unseen, because like Phillip (I think that was his name) said, you do anything the elders ask of to make your part believable.. (He even had a family, he left behind).