*Warning Spoiler* Read on your own risk if u haven't read TCF Ch 700++ !! *Warning Spoiler*
Fanfic reaction to :
Kim Roo Soo, No - current Cale Henituse want to tell his family (TCF) that he is not the original Cale before he find someone precious o...
How is it chapter one? Is it good? Bad? I need some feedback. This is the first time i write and 2.484 words. I almost wanna applaud myself. I never knew i can write so much and in workplace. Yes, i write it at my office for 3 or 4 hours? 😂
So, maybe some of you guys feel the ch 1 too long? Too serious? But i feel its necessary, as this is fanfic and i wanna make this story better as it my first fanfic. You can't expect they will calm after they got this bomb secret.
I dont like the story changed too much from original as i write fanfic, but i will insert cale ship little :) since i also ship cale with everyone. ChoiCale, AlbeCale, CalexEveryone except his figure father (Eruhaben and Fredo, since i wanna make them protect Cale) also Whittety since most cale x white ship include R*pe and i didn't like it (but no offense, since its peoples preferences, i only like fluff).
About Deruth? I won't make his reaction much. Since i have neutral feeling about him..hmm also Violan.
Move on. I also wanna asked, how to make that '+' comment beside paragraf? As i realize in other people fanfic, we can comment besides paragraf if we click '+'.. please kindly to teach me *cries* (ToT)/
If i have some typos and wrong word, please tell me too, since i didnt recheck it, as i need to rush to finish my job now. Its 3.46pm here at my place now.
Also i try to put picture as chapter cover but it got cut..so here i will put. fem!cale i make using Vyou app..feel free to add me if any of you play it. .My ID "Cecycia"
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Here it is, shy fem!cale..lol..what am i doing here? 😆😅🤣
