Why not me? | LuWei Cheng

!! please read !!

I can't help but think the plot here is insanely messy, i have been rereading a lot of the first chapters before 'Lovestruck' and the first 'extra' and it was everywhere.

Though please tell me that you understand half of what the story is trying to depict.

I started this to learn more about writing and the first thing i completely skipped is creating a plot, and that was my mistake. This book ended up being poorly written and seem to me was in a hurry. I have thoughts about stopping here and making a new one with the same characters in mind, but that wouldn't be necessary.

I used karate kid 2010 since it is what i thought would be out of the light and less popular, i never thought this would even get a single comment from anyone. But I am grateful it did.

I am not gonna end this book though.. It will have a big rewrite where i remove this from the public to enhance it. Just to connect the plot lines without the readers getting bothered to go back everytime something's edited.

This time i have a plot for every chapter, please be patient.

If any of you are muddled here is a brief summary;

She was always an extra to their love story (MeiYing & Cheng). Ought to not be affected by it, she bottled up the feelings she had for him; hiding to the point where she can no longer endure it.

Jealousy and in despair she thought the only way she could move on is to avoid him and attach herself to someone else, though no matter how hard she tries it was nothing but a waste of time— she hated how she's in deep waters in love with him while he looked over for someone else. She always wondered why couldn't it be her— she despised how it wasn't her.

[Unrequited love]

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I will do better next time <3

what do you think? :)