We've been training for a couple days, and I've become really good. "Remember __________, first shot straight to the throat. And you watch him, he steps before he punches." Four said to me a few minutes ago. I'm about to have my first fight with, huh Peter. That snot-nose Candor boy that stabbed that kid Edward in the eye.
"Hope you enjoy your factionless family, be sure you say Hi for me." Peter said trying to intimidate me. I already had issues with this kid, he beat Tris so bad, they almost kicked her out of Dauntless. "Yeah, I'll also make sure to give a special Hello to your family when I get there." That did just what I wanted it to. He charged at me only to be knocked back with two elbows th the throat. I hit him where it hurts with my knee and gave him one to the face. That was it he couldn't get up again, so Eric stoped the match.
Well Four made sure I wasn't going to sleep in the dorms now, because he wanted to protect me from the others. Well on my way back from Tori's from getting a tattoo. He wasn't there to save me...............
Ok sorry for the late update. Having some problems at home and having severe writers block. Well I hope to do at least one more update tonight, if not two. Any suggestions on how to make it better, I'm all ears.
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When I'm Freed (Reader+Four and Tris+Eric)
FanfictionHey guys this is my first fanfic so sorry if it's bad. I'll update this as much as I can. Hope you all enjoy. What if Tris fell for Eric instead of Four. Your going through Dauntless initiation with Tris and together you make it into Dauntless. When...
