As you can see, I wasn't able to finish editing. I did manage to fix some of the minor mistakes in the later chapters though I think it's already fine as it is. Also, I did manage to change at least a third of chapter 1. So far, these are the changes in the whole story:
•Changelog 1
General changes:
-Spelling, kasi ano namang uri ng editing 'to kung hindi ko aayusin yung mga maling spelling. :')
Chapter 1:
*Major changes:
-Better narration ng thoughts ni Lucas(as well as the change from pure tagalog to a mix of english and tagalog).
-Better paragraph formats
-First interaction ni Lucas at Andrei sa story(from a previously bland conversation to a more detailed and natural one).
*Minor changes:
-Amount of current students sa Danton High(from 396 to 395. Very minor pero kailangan ilagay dito for the sake of the accuracy in the changelog XD).
I'm not sure if I'll be posting more changelogs in the future or I'll just straight up finish editing and publish the chapters.
I won't be saying any possible date for the finished editing to be posted anymore. I'll just hope that I can finish this so that I can finally continue the story.
Anyway, to those reader/s that still look forward for the updates, thank you for the read. I wish you/y'all a happy new year!
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