Her eye was open...and one eye was dangling out near her chin....her intestines wear out ...her face had torn apart and had her flesh was showing in some places...the blood had dried in some of the areas...and formed a dirty red lump here and there...
Everybody went on their knees on silence with a tears in their eyes....their heart sank....monami went near her...slowly kept her finger near her nostrils....there was no sign of life......sumanji...she cried out loud...
Five minutes in... everyone were demising her death... nobody spoke a thing...everyone was in tears...
Faizi looked at the dhaaga....and cried uncontrollably...
Koel slowly moved to monami par kal toh dono aaken teek thi....yeh kaise hogaya...
Sanju too examined haa...itni cuts bhi nahi the....
Lagtha hai...koi jaanvar ka kaam hai....uske claws toh dekhiye..lagtaha phir hamla kiya hai..Premji said...
Aapko abi bhi yeh jaanvar ka kiya hua lagta hai...faizi shouted at him in anger...even in much louder voice he continued...hum toh...unhe rescue karne Jaa rahe the na...phir...yeh sab kaise hua koi jawab hai kise ke pass??!? Bolo....
Karan:.shaant ho jao...sab log darre hue hain..hume..bhi...
Faizi: Kya...shant hoon karan...bola tha mat jao...lekin nahin....tum logon ko... Daring karna tha...Aur yeh pointing to chitra inn madam ko toh #content chahiye thi..milgayi... kya jawab denge yaar Rajeshji ko...ki hum mission pe toh sahi salamat laut aye..par ek ghar mein .....he stumbled...
Sid:sambhalo...apne apko...sir...please...
Bala: bhaiji hum ek aur cheez bolna bhul gaye...
Sanju: kya???
Bala: jab hum...sumanji ko leke bhaage the..aur mein aur chitra pehle baage the...tab hume vo..soldiers mile...kahrahethe ki...hume...vo log doondh rahe hain pichle raat se...haina chitra??kuch bol na??!
He turned and saw her sitting in a corner..karan signalled him to go.. and he walked near her...
Chitra was just sitting with trembling legs...and crying....
Bala went near her and knelt before her...and held her hands in assurance...
Hum sab marne wale hain...bala...hum sab....bala wiped her tears ...nahi...tum..aise himmat mat haro...hum....chitra interupted him...and held his face ....agar mar hi rahe toh mujhe kuch kahna hai tumse...I Love you bala....pata nahi kab hua par hogaya...
Bala : tum dari huyi ho isliye...
Chitra interupted isliye nahi bol rahi hoon ki main dari huyi hoon...isliye...ki kyunki mujhe iss baath kaa zyada Darr ki main yeh bole Bina hi mar jaungi...
Bala took her into an embrace...and patted her back ..tu bi na..hum commandos hai...humare pass Pura team hai...hai humne sumanji ko Koya hai..vo bhi iss horrible tarike se ....par...hum back strike karenga yaar...tumm...strong ho chitra...
Chitra broke the hug....toh...#yes samju..?!?.
Bala smiled and hugged her back..
Chitra without breaking the hug vo strike back hotha hai duffer...
Bala: jo bhi ho tum samjh gayi na
chalo vaha sab wait kar rehe hain..
Monu wiped her tears...haa...hume aaye hue itne der hogayi hai...hum kabhi din kyu nahi dekh pa rahen....jab sumanji mili thi...she gathered herself it was about to dawn..phir....
Yea we have never seen the sun...sid agreed...
Koel:chitra...ache se yaad karke batao uss soldier ne kya kaha tha...
Chitra: yehi ki vo log hume pechle din se doondh rahe the...
Sanju: pichle din matlab???
Monami:Ek minute....first hum aayethe yaha pe...tab...night thi...phir achanak....humari hosh udd gaye...fir maine aur sumanji ne aap logon ko utaya...phir sumanji gayab hogaythi...phir jb mile toh rescue karne chale...
Fir se hum humari hosh ki bate...ab sumanji....humare sath nahi hai...toh..
Sid: tum kya keh rahi ho Monu
Day1 night hum yaha aaye...
Day2 night sumanji ka hamla hua...
Aur yeh day 3hai...?!??
Haa sid aisi kuch...Monu said
Vaise vo day nahi #night hai humne days nahi dekhe so....chitra interupted...
She went quiet as she could sense Faizi's anger
Faizi in his mind..yaha fatti padi hai isko logic sujh raha hai...
Premji: hume toh lagta hai ki yeh sab jaanwaron ka ki khel hai...before Faizi could interrupt...hum thake hue the...
Isliye hum pura din so gaye...nahi aap bataye na...faizi said...
Premji: nahi..hum...
Karan : guys...hume iss ghar ke bahar chalna hoga..ek baar...
Nahi karan hum aisa nahi kar sakthe...har bar jab iss darwaaza se jaane ki baath ki humare saath yeh sab hua...hum...
Are monami tum chinta mat karo hum jainge...dekho...Premji neared the door...
He pushed open the door.....the door squeaked at hit the other wall...and moonlight slowly hit the hallway... throwing some brightness...dekha...
Premji flew some steps higher in the air and fell thud on the ground and fell inside of the house......it was a like in seconds .... everyone's face was horror struck they moved near Premji...near his body....blood was there all over ..they moved up near his shoulders... everyone stood still...they saw his head cut off......they moved their flashlight 🔦 further his head was lying ten steps away...
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