Karan: kya kuch toh bolo...
Everybody just then realised it was dark and karan wouldn't know it...thay all said in unison...yes sir!!....the birds flew at this sound...
Faizi gulped..and took two steps backwards...don't worry it's just the birds...kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki tera fatta isme hi..he composed himself...be brave tu ek commando hai...
Karan: tu teek hai...
Faizi:haan..haan.. mujhe kya hua....hmm..tum bhi na karan..bhooth se dar tha hoon yeh...bird vird se nahin...
Karan let down his breath and composed himself.. controlling his smile...and went near the door of the mansion.. and everybody followed...and he scanned the door with the torchlight..and.....jerked off a bit.....he took baby steps backwards...he moved the light and saw it to be a spider eating a cockroach...it slowly sucked the whole brown cockroach in...
It was a very old door made of wood...
and it had some intricate details in it..but lost all the varnish...and appeared bloated..may be due to the moist in the air...
He removed the spider's web...and shook his hands to get it off from him...
He tried to push the door...but the door was stuck..probably given the fact that it had remained that way for a long time ...
He pushed it harder..and the door opened with a squeak...
Faizi smiled he was all ready for the squeak this time he wasn't scared...
I know nobody knows the technique of oiling...the doors..not this time..he felt proud of himself...but happiness didn't last long as a bat suddenly flew passed him ..giving him jumpscare..and he held koel's hand...
One flew over koel's head but she was standing still...like nothing happened...she has seen much darker shit in life..this is not going to scare her...
Everybody entered the mansion...
The floor was dusty as hell..noone was certain what it was made of ..when flashlights hit it ,, somethings flashed .hinting it may be old mosaic tiles...
That was a hall way..Monami lifted up the torchlight to see the end of it but it was pitch dark ...
Sumanji started chanting...
Jai hanuman gyaan Gunn sagar...
Jai kapis tihun lok ujaagar....
to herself....
They started walking...they could hear the steps clearly...the leaves crackled and split with their boots stepping on it ....
They proceed further to find a break in the hallway ...
They all took the turn..and it lead to a room...
Karan opened the door...and the mice made their way out running over his boots...and a foul smell came all of them closed their nose...
All proceeded in...
Monu hit something on her leg...she immediately move the torch and found a bed..she examined the bed..the foames of the bed were out...might be some cats job...and because it had a window next to it it the rain water made it soggy...
Sumanji proceeded futher at the corner of the room she found something..glowing...still chanting her mantras..she swallowed her saliva in...and proceeded that while others were just few inches behind her ....
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Fighting the Unknown - With Commandos
FanfictionDisclaimer: This is my first horror story.. You tend to describe something most accurate when you fear the most they say..I fear ghosts..so let's see how this goes.. This is about a haunted mansion and a group of people.. Cliche right?? But.. the p...
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