the vistor

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it was a normal day in sweet apple achers the sun was setting down making its way for the night.the apple family applejack granny smith big mac and last but not least the little filly applebloom were having some apple pie to settle in the evening. after they had their pie it was time for applebloom to settle in for the night. applejack:alright sugar cube its time for bed. applebloom: aw do i have to go to bed now. applejack:sorry but we got a busy day tomorrow so you,ll need a good nights rest(she said while nudgeing her head gently making her little sister giggle cutely). applebloom: alright then i,ll head up to bed then (she then gallops up stairs while her family clean up dishes).(applebloom makes her way to her room and turns on the light then makes her way to her bed climbing in and covering her self under the blanket not long later applejack shows to wish her goodnight). applejack:alright is my little sister all tucked up ready for bed. applebloom: yes sis (she said while smiling) applejack:(walking up to her)good because this little filly needs her beauty sleep. she then puts the tip of her right front hoof on applebloom neck and wiggles it left and right at speed. applebloom: hehehehehe hehehehey stohohohop ihihihihit thahahat tichchchchckles hehehe. applejack:aw is my little sister ticklish i think she is. applebloom:(now blushing)hehehehehehe dohohohohohont tehehehease mehehehehe. applejack then stops tickling her neck.applejack: hmm i wonder if your hooves are ticklish.applebloom:uhh i think i had enough tickles for the night(she said while covering one with the other). applejack:hmm mayby if i dust them with a feather duster or what about i scratch them with a back scratcher or i could scrub them with your manebrush(she playfully listed with a grin).applebloom:applejack stop it(she said in a nervous tone) applejack:oops sorry could.nt resist i better let you rest now(she then kissed her on the forhead before going to turn off the light).applejack:goodnight sugarcube i.ll see ya in the morning applebloom:goodnight to you to sis.applejack then turned off the light of appleblooms room before heading to her own applebloom shortly fell asleep little did she know she left her window open.sometime after a curtain creature climbs into appleblooms room thru the window then getting under the bed afterwards its fluffy tentacles come up from the bed and made there way to appleblooms sides before wiggling against them making applebloom move around abit while showing a little smile.later two more tentacles came up to tickle applebloom the first two brushed her sides left and right while the other two brushed the sides of her belly in circules making her smile wider and letting out little giggles.afterward another two came to tickle her hoofpits while the other tentacles continue tickling their tickle spots this made apple bloom giggle abit louder and move around even more.the tentacles then stopped tickling went down to the last spot to tickle...her hooves the tentacles that were tickling her pits wrapped around her hind legs keeping her hind hooves together while the other two went to the top bit of her hooves while the other two went to her soles ready to tickle them. not long after the tentacles start tickling her hooves and this made applebloom start laughing in her sleep.applebloom:HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHEY KNOHOHOHOCK IHIHIHIT OHOHOHOF APPLEJAHAHAHACK AHAHAHAHAND BIHIHIHIG MAHAHAHAHAC HAHAHAHAHA.the tentacles tickled rapidly as applebloom finally woke up laughing her head off from the tickling on her hooves and removed the blanket to see six tentacles at her hooves.applebloom:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LEHEHEHEHET MYHYHYHYHYHYHY LEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEGS GOHOHOHOHOHOHO.the monster under the bed controlling the tentacles didnt listen insted continued tickling.applebloom:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOHOHOHOHOP PLEHEHEHEHEASE IHIHIHIM SEHEHEHEHENSITIVE THEHEHEHEHERE.a few minutes later the monster stopped the tentacles tickling applebloom and unwrap her hind legs and went under the bed while applebloom panted. afterwards the monster decided to come out from under the bed and show itself to applebloom.upon seeing it appleblooms pupils went small her ears went down and she went into a loaf position and put her front hooves around her head lightly shaking from fear. monster:dont worry no need to fear i aint gonna hurt ya.applebloom:y..y..you wont monster:nope im actully a freindly monster(it said bringing its claw over to stroke her wich alarmed her as she cuddled herself the monster sees this and tells her that there nothing to be afraid of as its claw finally reached her and starts stroking her back wich to her suprise felt relaxing as she calmed down.monster:see what did i tell ya (it said while still stroking her back going up the top of her neck behind her mane wich made applebloom stick her tunge out from the treatment).applebloom:oooh that feels nice. this went on for five minutes before the monster finally decided to stop.monster:alright i think thats enough now its time to do why im here (it said getting the claws at the ready). applebloom:your gonna tickle me again arnt ya.monster:yep im afraid so i hope your ready(it then brought its claws over to applebloom sides and applebloom shakley rised her front hooves to her left and right with a nervous smile on her face).applebloom:ok im ready(gulps)how long are ya gonna tickle for.monster:oh only for a good five minutes i wanna hear that cute laugh of yours as much as i can.applebloom blushed upon hearing the compliment of her laugh.monster:now then lets not waste anymore time(it then dug its claws into appleblooms sides and then scratched up and down wich made applebloom burst out laughing as she waved her front hooves up and down.monster:hehehe tickle tickle tickle.applebloom:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DOHOHOHONT TEHEHEHEASE MEHEHEHEHEHE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA(she said while blushing).monster:aw why not you look cute when you are blushing.applebloom:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DOHOHOHOHO NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOT HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.monster:the claws go up and down and up and(it teased again as it continued while applebloom was laughing her head off until later when it was time to stop).monster:hehehe you enjoying yourself there.applebloom:somewhat so is this like your job or something.monster:yep it is and i have been doing this for a few years now and i actully like doing this job.applebloom:wow i can just imagine tickling alot of little ponys around equestria that must be so fun to do.monster:yep it is now i think theres one more spot for me to tickle. it then grabs her legs and puts her hooves on its lap getting its claws out at the ready. applebloom saw the claws and her heart rised and gave a nervous grin shaking her hooves abit.applebloom:um can you not use your claws on my hooves please. monster:why not claws to tickly for you.applebloom:um yes(as her nervous smile hasnt left her face). monster:hey let this get your mind of your hooves(it then spawned its six tentacles again and go over to applebloom and start wrapping her up till there was only her head and her hooves were seen.monster:there we go how is it.applebloom:rrr grrr its tight.monster:good cause now you cant do anything to stop your hooves being tickled hahahahahahaha.applebloom:oh dear im done for now.the monster nodded before scratching her hooves at speed with its claws sending applebloom into loud laughter then before and this pleased the tickle monster as it continued. applebloom: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA IHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIT TICHCHCHCHCHCHCKLES. monster:aw does it that means i must be doing a good job.applebloom continued to laugh from the tickling not long later start crying of laughter.monster:hehehe looks like you wernt lying when you said the claws were to tickly for your hooves to handle.applebloom couldnt respond only send out loud laughter later after five minutes it stopped scratching her hooves and gave applebloom a break to catch her breath.apple bloom:huh huh huh thank goodnesse thats over.monster:you doing alright there.apple bloom:yeah im good thanks can your tentacles unwrap me please.monster:oh yeah sure. thetentacles slowly unwrapped applebloom and gently put her on her pillow then getting of her bed so that it can put the blanket over appleblooms body.applebloom:hey how come nopony heard me laughing while i was being tickled. monster:oh well you see when i entered your room i put a sound proof shield around so nopony could hear and come here to see thats how im not caught doing what i do. applebloom:really wow thats cool say will you come back and tickle me again.monster:hmm i dont useully but mayby i will come again but now i have other ponys to tickle so see ya around. he said before hopping out of the window into the night afterwards applebloom covered herself in the blanket and smiled before finally falling asleep.


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