Shot 1 - (Rangmahal Track)

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Neil widen his eyes hearing this from juhi.
His anger raised over the head.
Even all the family shocked after hearing to her.

Juhi : Dekti raho ab mein kya karti hoon....ab tum hamesha hamesha ke liye yahi rahogi.
Aur mein Neil ke sath.
And she smirks.
Tumne meri Neil se shadi ki thi na??
I'm gonna spare you for this.
Ab yahi maro tum.....

Neil : Juhiiii....
He shouted furiously.
His eyes were bloodshot.
He sat with a thud on the bed.
Shweta : Ye juhi itna neeche gir sakti hai??
Chiii....
Neela : A...ab meri bachi ka kya hoga
Shweta : Tillu tu jaldi kuch karo.
Neil is hell worried now.He went restless after hearing to juhi.
Neil : A..Avnii....Avni...
Mein tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga.
Bebe went to him.
Bebe : Kuch nahi hoga puttar.
Tu himmat rakh na hoga.
All are really tensed for their Avni.
Neil immediately called to DD.
DD : Sir.
Neil : DD....jaldi hamari team ko leke aao.
It's really urgent.
DD has clearly felt worry in his voice.
DD : I'll be there right now sir.
They hanged up the call.
Neil got up and took the gun and bullets.
Ofcourse he didn't has rights to use weapon now as he is suspended.
Neil looked at the gun.
Neil : Avni...agar tumhare upar koi ankh bhi utaya na....I'll kill them.
Aaj mein kanoon ke bare mein bhi nahi sochunga.
I swear.

All the family were Aghast at his manner and words.
Prakash : Neil....
Neela : Neil hosh mein aao Neil.
Tum aisa kuch nahi karogi.
Neil : Nahi maa....uss juhi ko tho mein chodunga bhi nahi.
Shweta : Neil....gusse mein koi galti math karo.
Neela : Tum bass Avni ko leke aao.
Prakash : Haa puttar....ab hum ko sirf aur sirf Avni chahiye.
Neil : Mein vapas ghar meri Avni ko leke aunga.
I promise.
His eyes looked soo furious and powerful.
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After sometime Neil,DD and other 8 members reached Rangmahal.
They all secreately hidden in some places.
Neil : Guys I'm telling u again and again.(He instructed them through the bluetooth)
Pls be careful.
All : Yes sir.
All took their positions.
Somehow DD and Neil entered inside unknowing to everyone.

Juhi went to Avni who stood along with other girls.
Girl : Didi hum yaha se bahar kaise jayenge??
Hume bohot dar lag rahi hain.
Avni : Nahii...tum log bilkul math darna.
Mera pati ayega sab ko bachane.
Tab tak hum sab kud ko protect karna hoga.
Juhi went furious when Avni said "mera pati"
She went to Avni started her overaction.
Juhi : Avni.
Kya mera Neil sach mein ayega??
Even though she felt sad when she said "mera Neil" , she just shrugged it off
Avni : H..haa juhi.
Hum sab yaha se chale jayenge.
Juhi smiled widely.
Juhi : (In mind) Jaungi tho sirf mein.
Tum tho tab tak mar jaogi...and she smirked.
Here Neil is searching everywhere.
DD found Ali and freed him from the ropes.
Neil met Ali and felt happy that his friend is safe.
(Ali didn't tried to seperate avneil)
Neil : Ali..
And they both hugged each other.
Ali : Thanku Neil.
Neil : ye thanku baad mein pehle Avni ko doond na hoga.
Ali : Chalo..jaldi.

Here Avni fought with ballu and other goons.
Avni : Neil kaha ho tum....ab mujhe dar lag raha hain Neil...pls jaldi aajao.
(She said to herself)

Meanwhile juhi made a deal with Raginipandit and dayawanti.

After sometime all the girls along with Avni were dragged to the hall.
There are few men who came to purchase girls.
Avni is struggling to free herself from ragini pandit's hand.
But pandit slapped Avni.
Avni looked at her furiously.
Ragini held avni's cheeks tightly.
Ragini : Koshish bhi math karna...
Avni still didn't lost her hope.
Avni : Tum ek aurat ki tarah kaise janam liya tha.....chii.
Ab tumhari aur uss dayawanthi Mehta mein koi farak nahi hain.
Dono darinde ho.
Dayawanti is about to slap Avni again.......

But her hand was held by a strong hand.
She looked in the direction and shocked.
Infact all were aghast after looking at neil.
Neil : How dare you...
I'll kill you.
He said furiously.
Dayawanti turned to fear mode after looking at neil.
Yes,she is very afraid of him.
Neil left her hand in a jerk and made her to fall down.
Avni looked at Neil,firstly tears started growing from her eyes.
Neil looked at Avni and hugged her infront of everyone not bothering for them.
They hugged really tight.
He continuosly kissed on her head.
Neil : Avniii.....
Avni : mein janti thi Neil...tum sab ko yaha se bachane jaroor aaoge.
Neil : Kaise na aata Avni....meri jaan jo hain yaha.
And he kissed her forehead.
All the officers felt happy for them.
Remaining all are watching them like a movie.
They are still wondering that how could he come soo easily inside.
Well,He is Neil Khanna.
He can do anything.
All the batch of Rangmahal were at gunpoint.
Juhi came to Neil.
And hugged him.
Juhi : Neill....I know tum mere liye jaroor aaoge.
I love you Neil.
Neil closed his eyes tightly in anger and pushed her away in a jerk.
Juhi looked at him in aghast.
Neil : Kisne kaha mein tumhare liye aaya hoon???
Mein yaha sirf meri biwi ko,meri dost Ali ko aur uss masoom ladkiyon ko bachane aaya hoon.
Not for a BITCH like you.
He yelled top of his lungs.
Everyone astonished and feared at his action.
Avni : Neil...ye kya baat kar rahe ho tum.
Hum juhi ko bhi yaha se leke jayenge na Neil.
Neil looked at Avni with tearful eyes.
He cupped her face.
Neil : Avni tum itna selfless kyun ho???
Avni yaad rakhna jyada selfless hona bhi dangerous ho sakti hain.
Neil looked at juhi with bloodshot eyes.
Neil : And...this juhi has proved that.
Ab mujhe lag rahi hai ki tum paanch saal pehle sach mein mar gaya hota tho acha hota.
Chii....
Avni : Neil...pls...tum aisa kyun baat kar rahe ho.
Neil : tum ye baat iss juhi se hee pucho na Avni.
Juhi gulped down in fear.
Juhi : (in mind) ye Neil mujh se iss tarah se kyun baat kar raha hain.
Juhi again started her melodrama.
Juhi : Neil tum ko kya hua??
Tum aisa kyun baat kar rahe ho??
And she tried to held his hand.
But he jerked her hand
Neil : Dont even try to come near me juhi.
I really don't mind to kill u within a seconds.
Ali : Neill...ye tum ko kya hua hain??
Neil : Alii iss ladki janwar hain.
Juhi nahi.
Avni : Neil pls relax...
Neil : Nahi Avni ....tum pls chup raho ab.
DD : Babhi juhi aap ko maarna chahthi thi.
Avni and Ali are really astonished after hearing to DD.
Avni : D...DD ye kya keh rahi ho tum??
Neil : Haa Avni....this bitch want to kill you.
Juhi widen her eyes and sweat beads formed all over her body.
Juhi : Y..ye jhoot hain
Meanwhile Ragini pandit and dayawanti tried to escape but both has caught by police who are arrived just now.
Dayawanthi : Neil yaad rakhna ye Avni mahoos hain tumhare liye.
Jo bhi insan iss Avni ki jindagi mein honge vo sab ko barbaad karegi.
Neil : Tum manhoos dayawanthi.
Agar meri Avni ke kilaf ek bhi shabd bola na...I'll kill you flifthy woman.
Ragini pandit simply stood polite.
Ofcourse she surrendered to police now.
Juhi : Neil plss mujhe bhi leke jao yaha se.
Neil : You can go wherever you want.
But please mere peeche math aana.
Juhi : Lekin Neil mein kaha jaungi Neil.
I love you Neil.
Neil : Just shut up.
Just shut your mouth.
Avni : Neil shayad tum ko koi galat fehmi ho raha hoga Neil.
Juhi kyun mujhe marna chahegi Neil.
Neil : Because she want to seperate us.
Kyun ki vo tumhari jagah lena chahti hain.
Avni looked at juhi shocked.
Avni : Nahi Neil...
Neil : Yahi sach hain Avni.
She wanted to kill you.
Neil started playing that audio record in his phone.
After hearing that all astonished.
Especially avni.
Tears started flowing from her eyes continuously.
She didn't expected that juhi will go to this extent.
Avni looked at juhi with tearful eyes.
While juhi is glaring at her.
Neil : Ab koi saboot chahiye Avni tum ko??
Juhi : Haa mein marna chati hoon Avni ko.
Vo meri jagah kaise le sakti hain Neil.
Juhi held Neil's hand.
He again jerked her hand.
Juhi : Aur tum tho mujhe pyar karti ho na...haa??
Neil : No...I don't love you and never loved you.
Juhi : Why are you lying Neil...
Iss Avni ke liye??
It's ok Neil....I'll kill her.
Neil slapped her tight.
Avni shocked.
Jis Neil kabhi ek aurat pe hath nahi utata...aaj vahi Neil uski pyar ke liye ek aurat pe hath utaya.
Even DD is worried now as Neil is slowly losing his patience and control.
DD : Sir pls.
Avni : Neil ye kar rahi ho tum.
Avni went to juhi.
Avni : Juhi I'm sorry instead of Neil.
Lekin juhi mein kabhi bhi tum dono ke beech mein nahi aaungi.
I promise mein yaha se door Chali jaungi.
Juhi pushed her harshly,but neil held her.
Juhi : Just shut up you illegal woman.
Neil again about to slap but this time Avni held his hand.
Avni noded her head in no.
Avni : p..pls Neil.
Juhi : Neil tum iss ladki ke liye mujh pe hath utaya??
Neil : Mein Avni ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon.
Avni looked at him emotionally.
She is not getting actually what is happening.
Soon comissioner arrived there.
Comissioner apologized to Neil as he didn't trusted him.
Comissioner : I'm sorry Neil.
I trust you but The things are not in my hands.
That's why I has to took such decisions.
Neil : It's ok sir...I can understand.
Comissioner : You can join again now
Avni felt very happy now.
She smiled widely in a happiness as her husband got his job back.
Neil : Thankyou sir.
Comissioner : Welcome Neil.
And comissioner left from there.
And the goons are arrested and taken away to the police station.
Juhi is still standing there.
Avni's head started to spin.
She was about to fell down but neil held her.
Neil : Avnii...
Avni composed herself and stood again.
Neil : Kya hua???
Are u ok??
Avni : H..haa neil mein thik hoon.
Juhi smirked looking at Avni.
DD observed and felt something wrong.
There are still ragini,dayawanthi and juhi standing there.
Ragini and dayawanthi were ready handcuffed by lady police officers.
Avni now completely fell down unconscious.
Neil : Avni.....
This time everyone shocked.
Juhi is smirking.
Neil : Avni get up.
Kya hua????
Suddenly Neil noticed that blood is oozing from her mouth.
Neil eyed widened.
Neil : Av..Avnii....kya hua tumhe.
Juhi : Mar jayegi ab.
Neil looked at juhi shocked.
Neil : Juhi kya kiya tum logon ne meri Avni ko...
Juhi : Just I gave her a poison.
Neil shocked.
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Flashback.
Juhi mixed poised in the juice.
Juhi : Avni pls tumne aaj subah se kuch nahi khaya.
Atleast tum juice tho peelo.
Ab hum sab ko tumhari jaroorat hain avni.kam se kam meri liye tho ye juice peelo pls...
Avni smiled slightly and drank all the juice and trapped in her plan.
Flashback ended.
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Dayawanti and Ragini pandit too shocked.
They didn't knew about this planning of juhi.
They only made a deal that they will keep Avni here instead of juhi.
Juhi : Agar tum mera nahi hogi tho phir iss Avni ka bhi nahi ho sakti Neil.
Let her die.
Neil lost his patience and control.
He took out the gun and about to shoot juhi,but immediately DD stopped him doing that.
Ali went to juhi and slapped her hard.
Ali : Tum ek insan banne ki layak bhi nahi ho.
Janwar ho tum...
Nahi....tum se behtar janwar hee bohot behtar hain.
DD : Sir pls.....aap kya kar rahe hai sir.
Neil breathing became furious.
Neil : I'll kill her today.
DD : Sir pls babhi ko hospital leke chalte hain..plss..
Abhi humko babhi chahiye.
Pls sir
Ali : Neil chalo jaldi.
Juhi,dayawanti and Ragini pandit taken to police station for the special treatment.
Neil lifted Avni in his arms.
He is crying.
Ali is driving the car nd DD sat in the front seat.
Neil : Ye kya ho gaya Avnii......plsss...aankhe kholo.
Pls Avni....(crying)
Tears formed in Ali and DD eyes looking at them.
He kept her head on his lap.
Neil hugged unconscious Avni.
Neil : Mein tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga.
Kuch nahi hoga tumhe.
Ali : Kuch nahi hoga Neil....hamari Avni bohot strong hain.
DD : Aapke liye babhi thik ho jayegi sir.
Continues...........
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