The Mistic Awards

˚ ✶ ⋆｡˚ ⁀➷ | Best Female Protagonist Winners

I truly am invested in this story, all the unexpected outcomes and the twists and turns are something I, a thrill lover, am excited about! On the negative side of your works are the punctuations and minor grammar mistakes. You should definitely get an editor or maybe if you want to (I highly suggest so), is to learn how punctuation really works, understand the tone of your story/character and how would you portray/deliver your line, especially your dialogues in a real, good format for readers to enjoy more. This will make you a professional, credible writer; of course, this comes with lots of researching and understanding but trust me it will be worth it in the end. Take some time to go through your work and edit it, I am looking forward to your story! <3

Arafagons - earlfangs

Total: 69/70

I think I've fallen absolutely in love with your story. It was absolutely fascinating to read. I think the fight scene between Raia and the Tainted is beautifully written; the amount of mystery there is a reader's delight. The only thing I can suggest is to double-check the flow in a few areas. Through the chapters I read, most of the writing was stunning. However, in a couple of areas, the lines were worded a bit awkwardly. For example, if you're describing the effect of the wind on their clothes and the trees and are separating them into different sentences, make sure the sentences are distinct, and don't mix up the two points. Apart from that, though, I love your story, and I'm definitely going to be reading more of it when I can! <3

The Moon's Wish - _summering_

Total: 63/70

I loved reading about Clara—the scenes were great, and I loved how adorable parts were! My only issue would be to avoid the repetition of words and some sticky ones. For example, avoid repeating the word 'I' too much, especially when starting sentences. Furthermore, avoid glue lines. If it's clear as to who is speaking, moving, etc., then phrases like "he replied", "she said" and more can be removed, or replaced with action tags to help with the description. While its fine to repeat the dialogue tags, it's also necessary to make sure they aren't used where they aren't needed. Great job writing, and keep on going!

Destiny in Darkness: On the Way of Construction - dwarkaratna

Total: 29/70

As a reader, I don't really understand your story that well. There's a lot of punctuation missing; sentences need to be restructured, capitalisation problems and spelling mistakes, such as "i" instead of "I", "That's all, i can say" instead of "That's all I can say". You have a lot of words being shortened which is not a good sign if you're writing a book. It's best not to use abbreviations and numbers while writing, as that can negatively affect a reading experience. You really need to work on your blurb to attract readers. Your book is well received by lots of readers who are really interested and fancy your work. 

Rose And Venom - Siya_Stark3000

Total: 56/70

The prologue was quite lovely and entertaining. Chapter 1 to the last chapters read started with many confusing grammar mistakes and lots of punctuation errors. You kind of mix up all the tenses, not to mention many of your paragraphs are too long. It will be nicer if you shorten them for readers to enjoy. I love how you put visuals for your book, though it creates the character you vision to come to life. To be honest, the font you used is kinda distracting because your story is outstanding. It's like looking at brick-like words and was just messy all over with capitalisations errors and inappropriate use of punctuations(maybe the fonts made it hard to look up for all the mistakes). But I really adore the female lead, as she is classy, sassy and damn badass!