CHAPTER 16: REVEALATION + SAVING VIVAAN!!

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(Someone came n that was vivaan....Ananya got super happy n relief seeing him safe! Karuna ji got a lil confused!)

Annaya: wo actually aunty aapne aisa bola na toh main bhi tension me aa gayi thi!

Karuna ji: (smiles) hugs vivaan...kaha chala jaata hai tu,bata k jaaya karr na,mujhe tension hoti haina!

(Goes inside house)

Karuna ji: Ananya mera ek kaam karogi?! 

Mujhe ek zaroori kaam se bahar jaana padd raha hai,tum yehi ruk k vivaan ka dhyan rakhogi...mujhe aane me thoda time hojayega!

Anu: don't worry aunty aap aaram se jaake ayiye..Main hoon na!

Karuna: (smiles) dekh lena ye poora khana khaye! n mera aane tak koi shaitani nahi ok vivaan! (Leaves)

Ananya: vivaan tum theek toh hona? Main kitni darr gayi thi!

(but vivaan doesn't reply just smiles...she thought maybe he's a lil disturbed so didn't asked further)

(Then she noticed vivaan's reflection in the plate....it was someone else (dooba dooba [DD]) she got very scared... 

Gets up! DD got scared as well...then she ran out of the house screaming...

DD contacted bv n told him everything)

Ananya (to herself): (while running)  Ahhhhhhhh! Wo kaun hai! 

mera bhai kaha hai! (cries)

(then someone catches her n pinned her against the wall n cover his hand on her mouth,ananya got scared n struggles !!) (She opened her eyes n was shocked!)

(That was bv... there was a 2min gazing moment...dono ek doosre ko dekhte rehte hai! Moonlight on them! Bv eyes were tensed n anu's was full of tears!!

 He removed his hands off her mouth...)

Bv: Shaant ho jao! Main hoon!

Anu: bv!! Bv accha hua tum aagaye! Vivaan-Vivaan pata nahi kaha gayab ho gaya aur ghar me koi behrupiya aaya hai! Mera bhai kaha hai!

Bv: wo DD hai mere lok se! Vivaan kahi mill nahi raha tabtak vivaan k gharwalo ko koi tension nah ho isliye maine use waha bheja!

Anu: vivaan nahi mill raha matlab!

Kaha gaya hai mera bhai!!

Bv: tum fikr matt karo hum use dhoondne ki poori koshish kar rahe! ek baar uska pata chal jaaye tohh...

Anu: (thinking) shayad mujhe pata hai wo kaha hai!

Maine Ray ko kisi se baat karte suna tha ki...fikr matt karo timnasa me use kaal dishoh me leke aaoga!

Bv: kaal dishoh?! (smiles) bahut badiya Ananya...shayad Vivaan kaal dishoh me hai! 

Main jaata hu

(As he was going to leave Ananya holds his hands...her face had a worried expression...asking him if she could come along)

(He puts his hands on hers n conforted her saying ki tum yaha vivaan k ghar walo ka khayal rakho! wo vivaan ko sahi salamat leke aayega ye uska vaada hai!)

Anu: (smiles) Tum bhi apna khayal rakhna!

Bv: (smiles) Leaves!!

(Ananya returns home n apologise to DD)

KAAL LOK:

(KL gang trapped vivaan in a glass cage...the Cage was filled with Kaal water n all the bad forces which if enters vivaan's body...he will forever become a Kaalveer)

Vivaan: nikalo mujhe yaha se! kaun ho tum log! Rayyy tujhe to main nahi choduga!

Ray: fikr matt karo vivaan thodi der me tum bhi humare jaise ho jaoge fir hum sabb milke dharti par raaj karege

BV: Mere hote hue ye kabhi poora nahi ho payega!

Dil se bulaya!! Bv aaya!!

Timnasa: Aisa kia?! But afsos bv abb tum chahe kucch bhi karlo nahi bacha paoge tum apne chote bv ko!

Vivaan: Chota bv?!

BV: haa vivaan tum ek bv ho! Tum fikr matt karo main tumhe bacha luga!

Timmy: accha aur wo kaise...uss pinjre ko dekho...aaj purnima ki raat hai! Jaise chand ki chandni ispe padegi...timer onn ho jayega! Aur jaisse isme poore 10 min poore ho jayege kaal jal aur saari buri takatein vivaan me sama jaayegi HAHAHAHA!!! (Timer starts)

(Then everyone started attacking bv! He was at a disadvantage of 3 to 1 n was also tired from when he visited fikraa baba....vivaaan screaming looking at bv)

Ray: Are vivaan! Tumne nahi pehchana apne bv ko?!

(Uses magic on bv n he turns to dev)

Vivaan: dev bhaiya?! (shocked)

Bhaymaar: ha yahi toh hai! Tumhara BAALVEER!

Dev: (full injured) Tum fikr matt karo! Main apne bhai ko kuch nahi hone duga!

[Timnasa(smiles) then attacks bv(dev) but he was saved by balpari n all the pariyan who enters the scene...Bp tells vayu pari to give the magic portion which they made from their powers to bv... he drank n regained all his strength n his bv form]

Bv: Maa! Aapko aane me der hogayi!

Dhawani: hum kia kare bv isse banana me waqt lag gaya!

Bv: koi baat nahi pariyan...Abb timnasa ka khel khatam!

(War begins...KL vs VL ...bv manages to destroy the cage with all his powers.. b4 the time ends saving vivaan!)

(Vivaan freed...they hugged!! Bv hugged him dearly as he regained his memory n now know that vivaan was his mastikhor bahadur bv/partner/brother(in law😜).... 

But then vivaan faints n bp n every1 takes him to VL for veer snan so that any Kaal water or anything is freed from vivaan's body n he becomes chotaa BAALVEER.....)


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