LYRICS I COME UP WITH BUT NEVER FINISH

Breaking Edge (2)

Rap-

Yep I'm fallen
Breaking edge
Doin what you said
Ready to hit ground
Praying there's no sound

my friend- will stay a secret till i get permission to say there name- AMAZING WRITER 
gave me this from it-   may i say- love iittttt

Yep, I'm fallin
Breaking the edge (possibly could be "right over the edge" but dunno)
So don't come callin
I'm just doing what you said
I'm ready to hit the ground
No worries, I'll hit it with a smile
I'm praying there's no sound
I've been waiting for a while
So why would I frown
You hurt me over and over
Time and time again
I have finally lost my composure
I can't let no one else in
I've given up looking for closure
It almost feels like a sin
I'm not looking back now
I can't take how it's been
So I'm looking at the end now
So you can't try again.

here is my version of it --

Yep, I'm fallen
Breaking edge
Doin what you said.
Ready to hit the ground, prayin there is no sound.
But don't worry, i'll do it with a smile.
You and i have been waitin for a while.
So its finally getting done, why would i end it with a frown?
I am finally at the highest point in my life, wearing a crown.
You hurt me over and over, time and time, again.
I've finally lost my composure.
I've given up looking for closure.
i can't let anyone else in.
It almost feels like a sin.
Im no longer looking back.
I can't take my fucked up past,
constantly haunting my thoughts and ruining the present.
I am no longer your peasent.
So im looking at my end now.
Not repeating the same mistake.
i wont step back this time.
I'm breaking the edge.

Honestly- no one is better nor worse- just thought my thoughts would be placed-  but this person is an amazing writer- and allowed me to put it on here! I'll try and make sure there confident in the "You can @  me" thing. Ill put there name in the comments and on here when they do.