The Carnation Awards 2021 - 1st Edition {Closed}

Action/Adventure Result

Hello everyone, get your guns, weapons, cars, bags ready because now is the time for some action/adventure.

Thanking our two wonderful judges spinthenight and AAthatwriter
for taking time from their busy schedule and judging these books.

Now, let's not waste anymore time and present the Action/Adventure genre winners.

3rd place goes to Red Hood: The Fallen by BreanneLHeureux with a score of 89%.

Scoresheet
Cover- 10 /10
Title- 10 /10
Blurb- 7/10
Plot- 10 /10
Hook and flow- 8/10
Character Development- 12/15
Writing style & grammar- 9/10
Overall impression - 22 /25
Total - 89 /100.

And a review as promised.:-

The cover and title of the story is well chosen. Starting was good but the blurb could be better. The plot is interesting. Your writing style is also nice. Overall it was good.

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2nd place goes to School Of The Crown Assassins by ThePsychoQueen_ with a score of 91%.

Scoresheet
Cover- 9 /10
Title- 8 /10
Blurb-10 /10
Plot- 9 /10
Hook and flow- 10/10
Character Development- 13 /15
Writing style & grammar- 9 /10
Overall impression - 23/25
Total - 91 /100.

And a review as promised.:-

The cover and title of the story are fine. I like your blurb, the plot is also intriguing. It was adventurous and I enjoyed reading it. Overall, it was amazing.

Now, finally, 1st place goes to Aragons by earlfangs with a score of 92%.

Scoresheet
Cover- 9/10
Title- 10/10
Blurb- 9 /10
Plot- 10 /10
Hook and flow- 9/10
Character Development- 13 /15
Writing style & grammar- 9/10
Overall impression - 23 /25
Total - 92/100.

And a review as promised.:-

The cover is nice and the title is intriguing. The plot was amazing. It kept me hooked up. I love your writing style. Overall, it was amazing. I enjoyed reading it.

Congratulations to all the winners! Your books are amazing and you deserve this! Please send us a message containing your email address, your position and your genre to get the various stickers sent to you.

earlfangs fill out a form in the Carnation graphic shop to receive your covers. Your cover delivery will be made first priority in our graphic shop and there is no payment required! Use the cover for at least seven days (It would be really great if you decided to continue using one of our designs).

Note: The password to obtain a free cover is "winner 1st edition".

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To the other participants in this genre, please don't feel discouraged. You still have time to improve your writing and enter in our next awards. Here are your scoresheets:

1. The Rest of the Forever - ever_after04

Cover- 9 /10
Title- 10/10
Blurb- 7/10
Plot- 9/10
Hook and flow- 9/10
Character Development-12 /15
Writing style & grammar- 9 /10
Overall impression - 23/25

Total -88 /100.

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2. Ninjas in Modernity - Creator_in_red

Cover- 8 /10
Title- 9 /10
Blurb- 8 /10
Plot- 9 /10
Hook and flow- 9 /10
Character Development- 12/15
Writing style & grammar- 9/10
Overall impression - 22/25

Total - 86/100.

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3. Royal Cliché - AlphaLover15

Cover - 7/10
Title - 9/10
Blurb - 9/10
Plot - 8/10
Hook & flow - 8/10
Character development - 10/15
Writing style & grammar - /810
Overall impression - 15/25

Total - 74/100.

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4. The Runway Heir - Amain__Benters

Cover - 5/10
Title - 7.5/10
Blurb - 7.5/10
Plot - 8/10
Hook & flow - 7/10
Character development - 11/15
Writing style & grammar - 8/10
Overall impression - 16/25

Total - 70/100.

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5. Farming In Another Reality - smaravm

Cover - 4.5/10
Title - 6/10
Blurb - 5.5/10
Plot - 6/10
Hook & flow - 3.5/10
Character development - 8/15
Writing style & grammar - 4.5/10
Overall impression - 10/25

Total - 48/100.

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6. The Monolith - vocado_stans_writing

Cover - 6/10
Title - 8/10
Blurb - 5/10
Plot - 8/10
Hook & flow - 8.5/10
Character development - 12.5/15
Writing style & grammar - 8/10
Overall impression - 20/25

Total - 76/100.

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7. Adventure In A Different World - LilyLotus9002

Cover - 6/10
Title - 5/10
Blurb - 5/10
Plot - 6/10
Hook & flow - 5/10
Character development - 7.5/15
Writing style & grammar - 3/10
Overall impression - 9/25

Total - 46.5/100.

Thank you for participating!