chapter 1.1

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Thank you so much for your love you gave on Affliction.😘😘😘

My biiiiiiggg thank you to those who did 100 comments.❤️❤️

I am publishing this chapter again.

There are few reasons for it.

1. My few co- authors adviced me to
not to put political angles as it may make people judgemental or start making some perception about politicians or something. That's why I am changing plot background a bit but story will remain same.

2. As you all know I never intend to make my protagonist super rich or authorative. I believe in showing them hard working rather than rich but since this story demands to be like that as it involves conflict for power and money, so I have to make them KHANDAANI RAHEES kind of people but don't worry you won't feel cringe due to it.😊😊😊😊

3. Many of you asking if it's a love story or not.

I must tell you that it's a love story with twisted human nature you won't be able to forget rest of your lives.🤗🤗💜

3. To clear confusion:-
  Eldest - Kritika(*)
I- Ankit (*)
II-Parakram(**)
III-Vishwajeet(**)
IV - Anmol (***)
V- Deepak (cousin)
VI- Abhinav(*)
VII- Vishal ( adopted)
VIII- Karan(**)

I assure you that you will regret not reading it. 😂😂😂

Don't forget to comment please. 💜💜💜
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" Girl's are indeed their fathers' special."Mr Singh considers himself very lucky to have every morning meal made from his daughter's hand.

"It's because fathers always make them feel special." Kritika said serving him smilingly.

Mr Singh was having breakfast with his only daughter and  seven sons.

"This is not fair. Why every time didi is your favourite? Why can't it be me?" His sixth son- Abhinav complaints like a 7 year old child although he is 25 years old.

He easily gets jealous when he does not get his needed attention.

"Because you are neither the youngest not the only daughter." Mr Singh's seventh son- Vishal laughed at his older brother

"I wish I reborn as only daughter." Abhinav made a wish which cannot come true.

"Calm down Abhi. Calm down. You should be grateful that you are not at least adopted." Mr Sing's second son- Parakram taunted Vishal.

Vishal is not Mr Singh's real son.

He is the son of one of his special men.

Vishal's biological father lost his life for the Mr Singh.

Mr Singh has not adopted him even on papers but he considers him as equal as his other sons.

He does not pity Vishal.

He has taken responsibility of many other children like Vishal but never give them the position of his son.

He gave it to Vishal because he deserves it.

He has proved that his heart is as pure as his father's.

"Parakram." Mr Singh growled at his second son's rude words.

"Papa. Let it be. His jokes are harsh few times." His fourth son- Anmol interrupted to make situation less heated.

Anmol has always been the peace maker in such circumstances.

He is best at negotiation skills.

His patience is something his younger and even older brothers look up to.

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