BOOK TITLE:
Soulmates & What We Expect
by: of_her_randomness
REVIEWER: L_Lawliet_0928
TITLE: 10/10
It's cute and goes with the story really well!! It gives a bit of an insight to what the story will be about.
COVER: 4/10
I think as a fanfiction, it should have the characters on it, but other than that, it's a pretty cover and I like the font of the title on it.
DESCRIPTION: 9/10
It's great! It gives an introduction to what happened before the story and at the beginning, and it shows what it's gonna be about! I love that it hooks the reader in like a description is!
PLOT: 9/10
It's cute and interested! I haven't watched Miraculous Ladybug, but you've explained it so well while you're writing this that I actually understood it!!
ENJOYMENT: 20/20
I don't know Miraculous Ladybug, but I loved this fanfiction!!! You did an amazing job with this!!!!
GRAMMAR/SPELLING: 28/30
Your sentences are sometimes run-ons, but other than that I only found one or two spelling errors while reading this! Great job!
CHARACTERS: 10/10
I don't know these characters very well, but they're so cute, and the way they interact is so natural and cute!
REVIEW: Your writing style is great! You describe things really well and your plot is fluid and and really works with the story! I would just change the cover and read over your chapters to fix the couple of spelling errors there were :) Other than that, great job on this, I actually really had fun reading this!
90/100
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