Hi! I just wanted to stop by and say thanks for all your votes on Fallen Allegiance, I really appreciate it! :)
Hey Mohammed, just wanted to drop by and say thanks for the vote on Risen, and for the follow. Hope you continue enjoying my story.
Hey, thanks for the votes on Biohazard. It's in line for rewriting so I assure you it will be much better after the long work I will put on it :D
@MohammedUsmanShafeeq Hey again! Just wanted to thank you for all of your support and comments on Soulwoven. It always means the world to me to see someone enjoying the story so much. :-)
@MohammedUsmanShafeeq Bummer! But I guess that instant feedback is one of the nice things about Wattpad. My suggestion: keep writing all the way through the book and then come back to the first chapter again. Chances are, your thoughts about your writing will have evolved by then. :-)
@realjeffseymour thx I was trying to give it a hitch hikers guide to the universe feel to it, but I guess no one like the ending of the first chapter.
@MohammedUsmanShafeeq Hey! Just wanted to say thanks for your vote and comment on Soulwoven. Glad you're enjoying the story so much! :-)
...also, I love the title of your story. :-)
there is this other writer out there that I really like but could use your help but I think both of you could learn alot from each other. with you I think overall your stories are really cool but it takes a while to be amazed by your stories but this other person and tidbits of awesome story telling but overall they need some discipline like your writing has. check out this story of the person I am talking about and you will see what I am talking about, http://www.wattpad.com/story/66472-the-dragon-knight-the-awakening-of-the-legend
if your scared of someone stealing your story why don't you just copy right it or send your book to you in recorded mail and then you could have... Hello [Completed Trilogy] when you mentioned the phantom omega I was like OMG! Terrell must be him. Regona City: The Creed OMG! you killed off Jemma so easily wow, but we never know what will happen next she might come back from the dead or maybe another jemma who is... Half-Light @Sandman113091 I am all for being thrilled at the end of the chapter but if you can keep the pressure building up instead of just popping in at... Enter The Sandman 2: Karmat... your story is getting better slightly but why do you break your chapters into 3 pages ALOT! Its kind of weird if you increased your chapter to at... Enter The Sandman 2: Karmat...