NO WAY! You wrote this? I read the whole thing beginning to end a few weeks ago! Great job!
i've probably said this already but i'll say it again, this is amazing! you really have a way with writing.
wow u made me laugh tonnes in the first few sentences and then feel like breaking into tears by the end of the same short chapter! u r so talented! xx <3
The nurse's lines were too harsh and straight forward. Maybe you can make her break it into Chloe slowly not thatstraight forward. Anyway, i loved it :)
I love this story but please I would like to know how you made your cover! I will give all credit but please tell me!! Thank you!
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| Name | Alexa |
| Location | Home of the Brave |
| Birthday | Feb 16 |
| Member Since | May 08, 2011 |
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