The Alpha's Forgotten Mistake

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Mandas58008 By Mandas58008 Updated 3 months ago
Kay-lee grew up with just her human mother as her guide in life. When she shifts for the first time, she is introduced to the world of werewolves and takes the position as Alpha of the Moon River Pack. What happens when Kay-lee is confronted with the father she never wanted to know, when he tries to take over her territory and her pack? What will happen when he finds out that the Alpha he is trying to destroy is actually the daughter he never knew he had?
GoneOverWolf GoneOverWolf 2 months ago
A lovely end to the chapter. You slipped in and out of tenses a lot, though.
GoneOverWolf GoneOverWolf 2 months ago
Wonderful way to open. Where the hyphens are should be commas. It's been a while since I've found a good, well-spelled, grammatically correct story on WattPad. I'm just gonna read~
maurayschutte maurayschutte 9 months ago
Is ur book on hold? I hav been waiting a few months for an update now, this book is good and i was hus wondering if u going foward with it
:D I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHO HE MADE TAKE HIS PLACE AS ALPHA !!! THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME! !!
NatalieBaulch NatalieBaulch a year ago
I really enjoyed reading this! I can't wait for you to update it :)
thuglife87 thuglife87 2 years ago
i love this book! its all i think about when im not reading it