Amazing ! very awesome ! as other comments say, few grammatical errors here and there but i liked it. i voted it !
You have a really good start (: I noticed there were a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed. I like the amount of detail you have in the story.
This is a good start, the details are great, you have some errors, but it is still a good story :)
by the way..the starting is awesome..loved it... And yeah ... I joined wattpad just A day before.. And ur story is the 2ndmost story i read 'bout!:)
I like it, can't wait to read what happens next, upload soon my dear! Voted, and added to library. =)
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