Mine, Bitten

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Emmy By Emmy Completed
For years, Lilith “Lily” McDermott was kept in the dark from the McDermott family secret. Now, her estranged father has asked that she join him on an exploit. Despite her father’s peculiar practices and unusual interest in the unknown, she yearns for an adventure outside her dull and ordinary life, and gladly partakes in the excitement.

When Lilith first arrives in the beautiful, untamed wilderness of the Carpathian Mountains, she is alive with feeling and a sense of belonging, but her journey takes a sudden dangerous turn when perilous truths begin to unravel and the dark Carpathian hills reveal a deadly secret of its own.

In the midst of darkness and betrayal, Lilith finds herself at the mercy of a dangerous and unworldly creature, baring fangs and a ravenous thirst that seems to yearn for her blood alone. She is frightened yet drawn by the creature that appears as a man but hunts as a predator. Can she find love in a world filled of darkness and insatiable desires?

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Wow!!! Now, that's what I call a Prologue!!!!!
This story is bloody genius!!!!!! As is the writer!!! ;) <3
Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Incredible and evocative imagery!!!!!
Dazzling plot!!!!!
I am in love with this story!!!! Thank you for sharing!!!!!
I know I'm saying the same thing to you all, but I'm just awed that people like it. I never considered poetry a strong point for me, so it makes me really happy that you're all responding so well.
Loving this line, such a talented writer. I'm reading all your stories 
@Saskkia that is told to be the origin of Dracula who was the first vampire. it's all just word of mouth myths
Was i the only one that thought about dracula from hotel Transylvania