I love it!! Its great!! I havnt read a story like this in on wattpad keep it up........btw read my story nd tell me way u think thx
one word: EPIC. wow, i overuse that word! anyways, it epic! love love LOVE it!! more please! :D
@KrYsTaL323 Beeping and being woken up by an alarm in the beginning is very cliche and a big no no. my criticism was only meant to be helpful.
Never ever start a story with BEEP BEEP BEEP. Stories don't have to have to start in the morning and beeping turns readers off.
This is really good. i love the way it's written and i think that this story will be a really popular one!
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| Name | Krystal |
| Location | Los Angeles CA |
| Birthday | Jul 27 |
| Member Since | Mar 26, 2011 |
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