A nice way to start a story. very descriptive :)) Continue it more! and maybe add more thrill and I'm sure that it'll be perfect! ;)
The start of the story is interesting and eye catching. The descriptions are really good and give a nice visual. All in all I really like this book so far.
I love ur descriptions! :) very well written and has that movie view once u read it. Great job! :D
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| Name | Error 404 |
| Location | Somewhere in Earth |
| Member Since | Apr 10, 2012 |
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