So there are a few things I'd like to bring out about this copy of The Optimum Project, and they are:
1. Hopefully, this will be my last re-write, I'm getting a little tired of it and I'm sure you are too.
2. This version of The Optimum Project is similar, but not the same. You'll see what I mean if you've read the original, I added some things, and took others out.
3. This one is better! I hope... let's just go with a definite "It's better" attitude.
Otherwise, my reasons for doing this are similar to the reasons I re-wrote it in the first place: The world I had built was not the one I wanted others to live in...
That is, it wasn't how I envisioned it, whether it was just that it didn't flow correctly in places or that my characters and environments weren't being utilized like they should have been, hopefully, this copy fixes that.
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The Optimum Project: Revised Edition
Science FictionSooo.... yeah, I re-wrote the optimum project, I hope this works. The re-write is VERY different from the original, it adds more 'beef' to the characters and locations, and actually has a bit of a plot arc. Characters will love, lie, steal, cheat, d...
