Do people not realise that when they're story is written like this :
"im so ugly haz" i said. Harry kissed me. "I love you" he said. "I love you to" I said. "Lets get a coffee" he said. "Sure" I said. We went to Starbucks and I was dressed in uggs an oversized sweater and tribal print leggings and my hair was in a messy bun. "lets get it to go then well get nandos" he said. "ok" I said.
I IMMEDIATELY DON'T WANT TO READ IT.
I'm sorry, okay? Just, see how hard it is to read that?
1) #CommonWhiteGirl (but that's a different entry)
2) um, paragraphs much?
3) Pretty sure we covered speech marks in school when we were 7
4) Grammar. We've been doing this our whole life.
And
5) It's. Very. Boring. And. Cliche.
Just, proof read? Ok? But if you don't have time and you literally want to get it up, over, and done with - that's acceptable.
Also, what really annoys me is things like this :
"I will defiantly love you forever." It's definitely. Definitely. Not defiantly, they mean two different things.
When we reached the bottem of the stairs, we were out if breath. Bottom. B-O-T-T-O-M.
So yeah, maybe turn autocorrect on or get a beta? That really helps, trust me.
So that's it for now! Hope you liked it and vote/comment! If you have ideas, lemme know ;) till next time darlings
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