I don't know if I will continue to work on this story or not. It's not getting the kind of result I wanted and this has never happened before. The only time I get a lot of reads and votes and no comments is when it's a poem. I'm working on the 6 chapter right now and If I don't have any comments after chapter 6 I'm giving up. I'm not saying this just to get comments but to give you all a heads up and being truthful. I have had two people tell me it's a good story but it doesn't look like it by the results. I guess I just don't have enough confidence in myself still. Going to a wedding tomorrow and then a family Christmas party Sunday so I won't be uploading chapter 6 until mostly in the middle of next week.
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Jack Dark (on hold)
HumorLily Corey had lived over seas for the past ten years and is back home after her father was honorably discharged after being injured in a bombing. All of her old friends have either moved away or went off to college. The only people still home are K...