I think it was obvious that this book was a very rough draft. It's the first story I have ever "finished." I know it seems a bit amateur, and I apologize. I'm still learning a lot about what my style is and how I want to write and things along those lines. I just fell in love with the plot and pursued it.
MY QUESTION TO YOU IS: Should I make a rewrite? Where the characters are better explained, chapters made longer, and plot more detailed? I want to know your guy's opinions before I fix things that you guys would not even care to read. Thank you eternally for all the support you guys have shown me :) I love you all.
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Freak Show
Horror"You've already bought a ticket, and there's no turning back now." Rosalie has been kidnapped by a cat-eyed man named Manson, the owner of a popular Freak Show. What no one knows about Manson's Makeshift Menagerie, though, is that Manson doesn't hav...