I wrote the first few chapters of this in sixth grade and they are SO BADDDD. AWFUL. FOWL. HATE THEM. THE PACING IS AWFUL. THE GRAMMAR IS AWFUL. THE WORD CHOICE IS AWFUL. THE WAY I AVOIDED HURT COMFORT LIKE THE PLAGUE EVEN THOUGH IT WOULD MAKE THE FIC 87% BETTER.
anyway I think I'm gonna rewrite it.
Should I
1. Make a new book for the rewrite
2. just go back on this book and replace the chapters with the new one
yeah
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Percy and the Spirit World (PJO ATLA Crossover)
FanfictionEleven year old Percy Jackson was found unconscious near the Northern Watertribe. While nobody recognized him, he looked watertribe-ish, and they couldn't just leave a child to freeze to death in the snow. So Master Pokku decided to take him in. (He...
