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KaylaAdeline

Hey! Would you mind checking out my poetry? I’d love to hear your thoughts. Here's a quick sample, hope you have a great day! 
          
          When the clock strikes midnight
          I will not flee the scene.
          I will stand before you
          As my dress disintegrates 
          Into an oversized T-shirt
          Perfume replaced with sweat.
          You will choose your future
          At the end of the night
          Because I 
          Am my own fairy godmother
          And I break 
          My own spells.

KaylaAdeline

@whoisIQ yeah this is about just being in control of your own future basically. Thanks for the feedback 
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whoisIQ

@KaylaAdeline absolutely.
            Also, I have a question.
            Is this sample you recreating Cinderella escape from the ball but in your imagination? Or it has a deeper meaning?
            And I personally wished you wrote Tee instead of T-shirt. I actually read it as tee and didn't realize it was Tshirt instead. Plus it rhymes with scene. :)
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DavidEAnderson100

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and vote on The Art of Breathing Underwater. I greatly appreciate all your support!!

DavidEAnderson100

@whoisIQ I can´t even begin to tell you how much it means to be to hear you say that. A million thanks!!
            Oh, and congrats on graduating high-school!! And good luck with your writing your book!!
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whoisIQ

@DavidEAnderson100 you're welcome
            Literally the most amazing LGBT story ever
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whoisIQ

*screams till my followers go deaf* 
          
          I apologize to those who I promised to read their books and give feedbacks. I have been so busy with exams but it's over. I am officially done with high school  I'm so happy. I graduated on the last week of September.
          
          So I will take up those reading requests and hopefully start my book soon.
          
          *More screams*

whoisIQ

I'm back and I'm coming with my first book in a while called, ‘2:04’. I hope you enjoy it cause you're in for a long rode. I want to have a specific amount of words per chapter, so chapter 1 is not coming out until this Thursday. I also want to have a regular day when I update so if Thursday works out, that will be it. Bye Saturday people.