tim

I really like your work I can really relate to it

hi.. yes very.. Good start! It took me away and that is the mark of a good story..  i hope you write more soon..  

thx for adding my book is it interesting?

thanks linera.. its very kind of you to message me. I'm glad you are the first too after voting for 'a very very short poem' the fact that you get it too means so much to me. I hope my poems dont make you feel too sad but there are one or two really nice ones about being in love, lol. I luv your profile page. kind of agree with the not liking over use of 'I' lol but it has its place huh.. take care. tim

thanks for your comment I'm glad I'm the first person to comment on your message board!!!! I'd like to read some of your poetry. I think I'd enjoy them